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Lock You Up In My Heart

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Autor: Morielle

4.43 (12 Avaliações)

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Sinopse

What happens when you find out that you have lost everything when you come back?
Fame, money, status and most importantly - your possession! And to make it even worse, what if is actually done by your loved one?

This is the challenge Huan Li has to face after logging back into the game. After being betrayed by her boyfriend, she decides not to ever trust anyone!

This is a story about a girl getting all her glory back and who knows, maybe even a significant other?

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SupremeOverlord123

Will their be a secret to the game and turn real that will be awesome like The Lord Empire or other VR game that might turn real? Hope their will be but hay it’s only my opinion and I like my opinion of VR that turn real lol.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Giving 5 star cause we got a FM protagonist with VR why not😁😁😁👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁

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churry

Few grammar mistakes, but nonethless enjoyed reading it, you can see the author improving and developing together with the story, it has a great potential. Will be following for future updates! Good luck, keep writing! ^_^

4yr
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SupremeOverlord123

I’m giving a good rating because their a smooth update on chapter with a female protagonist in a vr game. Hope you don’t drop it author👍👍👍👍🙏👍👍👍

5yr
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Gaela
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Finished 69 chapters in 2 days... noticing a good improvement in the writing; like really good compared to the first chapters. I like the story and I’m expectant to see how it goes... I know you’re busy so Good Luck and keep going... I’m waiting ^~^

4yr
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armanzano23

Looooveee it!!! Vv

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ryuxie
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I like how the story goes.I can't wait to know what she will do next.thanks for an amazing story 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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salinadenz

@@@@@😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘love love love much,,thank you,,,,hindi ko na alam ano isulat ko,,kasi hindi ko masyado gusto ang istorya sorry po talaga

5yr
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Yanorth
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By the sinopse my hopes was really high but it was total disappointment, as a video game novel in this point is total rushed, if don't have status screen is ok I'm understand, but the lack of description in fights and the lack of explanation and description in skills. It is a video game novel but video game part is really weak

5yr
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Evelien_Lee

I can't tell how much I love this story :) I am so excited to find out what happens next! Your characterization is amazing and your story is so well written. I hope you continue this story!

5yr
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lovelilili

I love this story i always searching for Female protag with the design in game element im very thankfull for u author so keep going and plss update more😊

5yr
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agiletick

i like the novel so far cant wait to see where you take it (for 140 word so no need to read this) "I am the Bone of my Sword Steel is my Body and Fire is my Blood. I have created over a Thousand Blades, Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood Pain to create many Weapons Yet those Hands will never hold Anything. So, as I Pray-- Unlimited Blade Works"

5yr
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soulla

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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