Limitless Dream System: Primordial Creation

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SageGodVerhar

Shameless to rate my own novel. This is an rewrite of my first as it was not that good so I rewrote it. I hope that all the readers will enjoy my novel. I will probably just post whenever I feel like it with forgetting the count of number of chapters per week sometimes, so I may go over, but I promise you I will never go under unless something happens. But like I said read my novel and give me a chance as this is still 'technically' my first novel, and give me your power stones. PS some characters do not belong to me so do not copyright me as I like other animes, novels, games, and etc and will incorporate into my novel.

LV 4

DevaGodrekt555

A very good story it starts off slow with alright or below average writing quality, but later on it gets better and better. The story is info dumb when he starts cultivating, but is still good.

LV 11

Beyond_Namez

Grammar should be worked on. There isn't really and world development. The conversations are very awkward. It's just a weird novel. .................................................................................................................................................

LV 6

DonHit

a good novel for me 👍🏻😁👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

LV 6

ExaltedBlank

Keep it up and pls release more chapters its an intersting story with some good stuff to look for in the next updates. Cant wait till he go clback and **** his family and the empror

LV 11

dobby135

The Story is really orginal. I havent read anything like that before. The story is mixed of many other novels, systems and cultivations storys. It is fun read.

LV 10

starligh

super recommended one of my favorite fanficks -------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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DonHit

❤👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊

LV 3

Sinsaretegreatest

Love this novel just like the other as long you get past the grammar errors the it would be a good read. The author needs an editor as you can see in some chapters his grammar is top notch then other its subpar.

LV 7

Melshan

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎

LV 4

nirwana

looking forward to it ............................................................................................................................................................................................................... waiting for more chapters

LV 5

SlowSleepySloth

I gave it a chance, but its just a bazillion info dumps and excessive random golden spoon power ups sprinked with bad *** scenes. No meaningful plot in 100+ chapters and the characters all kinda suck. Very meh, there are way better novels out there.

LV 5

giancarlo812

very good story , likeable characters and most important an MC that gets lucky , only thing missing is for this novel to become a 3d movie series

LV 14

Dash6217

Novel is good, but grammer is kind of off. But it is mostly because of the author giving us lots of chapters per day causing his grammar to go down, but it needs to be fixed other than that it is good.

LV 6

CZ2128_Delta

THIS IS A RE-WRITE RIGHT?? SO WHY THE F*CK DOES IT STILL HAVE SO MANY ERRORS? p.s. LOVE YOUR STORY SO PLEASE FIX THOSE GODD*MN ERRORS! LOVE YOUR STORY SO PLEASE FIX THOSE GODD*MN ERRORS! LOVE YOUR STORY SO PLEASE FIX THOSE GODD*MN ERRORS!

LV 14

Daoist_Golden_Moon

if this novel didnt have a system i wouldnt read it ..............................................................//////////////////////////////////

LV 15

Danule

I love the idea. The story has a unique twist to the genre. My only problem is to much info dumps and not enough story. Besides that great job :)

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MMMuKNOWuWANTit

I like it I like it more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

LV 5

Daolord_Ma

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LV 6

fatloser

I feel the writing is better then the old one ............ ..................... ,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, , , , , , , ,,,, , i vvvchc , ,,,, ,,,,,,, , , , , , , ,, ,,,,,,, ,,,,, ,,,, ", , , , , , ...............