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Kage is excited because the Nerve Gear has finally come out with its game Sword Art Online but it quickly turns into something much darker very fast. Can he survive this death game and protect those he cares about or will he die trying
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Hahahaha. A good Fanfic till now can´t wait how it will continue Keep it up Author-sama! ______________________________________________________________
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Well, really good story, as we see how kirito develop even if he is not the mc. just great. .
Last Sword is an SAO fanfic that seems to take place in an alternate timeline where Kirito travels with our protagonist, Kage. Other than that, the story seems to follow the anime pretty well, but of course I can't say much about that since I'm not a ******** fan of SAO. The writing is very neat, with just a few spelling mistakes. It was very easy to read and the dialogue was easy to follow :) The story progresses very well and I can definitely see the adventure aspect. I can't wait to see what comes next so keep up the work on that! As for the characters, there are some new characters introduced other than the protagonist. However, the only problem I have is the personalities of the two MCs (Kage and Kirito) seem a bit weak. There could definitely be more work done on giving them more noticeable and polarizing personalities. But other than that, keep up the good work!!
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Keep up the good work ‘9,’48,!8!!4;84;!94!;9(‘,94!;94;!84,!4,8’49’,94’,94,!49,!9(,’59,’04’.03.’94’,94 ‘9(,’94,’94,’49,’94,’94,’9(‘,95’?
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keep it up the good work....................................................................................................................
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