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A casual fan of RWBY is reincarnated as a member of the Schnee family as a illegitimate child. He is shunned and treated poorly by his father. Armed with the knowledge of whats to come, he will do whatever it takes to prevent the fall of Beacon Academy.
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I really enjoy reading this. There are few RWBY FanFic that are still being written, let alone one of such great caliber. This has shown its potential and is indeed able to go far. The story has great original characters that do not make the story worse but instead bring it to greater highs and make the plot more immersive than I expected. Instead of being a cardboard cut-out of each other they each have their own feelings, backstory, and traits that make them who they are. Also, the author knows for a fact how great Weiss is for a waifu. The main character is not an idiot and is willing to work for what he wants done. Overall I really recommend this FanFic and would like everyone to help it become more known. I would rate it 5 stars but the author sometimes becomes too immersed in writing and forgets to space out fight scenes and sometimes other scenes. Thus concluding my review.
I like it but I think you should space the paragraphs out more since it feels like I am reading a textbook. But I am only at around 15 though so I will see if it will get better.
An awesome novel. Keep up the good work. I love the main character and the interesting direction that you seem to be taking the story. You should expand on some of your original characters a bit, but otherwise everything's great.
One of the fey good rwby fanfices out there hahahah hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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Nice story that I have really enjoyed so far. My only complaint is the updates as it seems that you have only updated twice this past month. Other than that keep up the work and I’ll wait for the next update.
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Current MC feels like he got broke by his father action towards him. Such as beating and cursing at him due to his... related child birth... I would think he would have a few screw loose as his life would be a mess. For his sibling they got the cold shoulder but not how MC got it. I would like to say the Brother of MC shouldn't mope about how his life sucked since MC got shafted...