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In the middle of a crimson field of flowers, there was a pitiful man fallen in the ground, the man clothes were long ago bathed in blood. near to him stood a arrogant man with a cold look in his face. He too was bathed in blood, but the blood wasn't his, with the last power he could utter at that moment the fallen man barely managed say something.
"Wh-wh-y - Cough! " - the man tried to ask, but he couldn't as he continuously coughed dark red blood
At that moment the arrogant man replied indifferently, it almost looked like he didn't have anything to do with this situation, he continued to utter with a completely cold voice, strangely it almost seemed that he was reading line of a book.
"You will die here without no one even knowing about your sacrifice" - he said with voice that resembled one of a demon.
"In the end you was nothing more than a background actor..." - the deep voice calmly uttered.
"Aa-AAgh" - the pitiful man tried to say something, but soon his voice would never be heard again.
"You efforts will be forgotten... never to remembered"
"A truly pitiful man, There's no one to even remember you, a perfect ending for an extra like you" - as he finished saying that he lifted his sword and atacked directly the man's head.
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Author here! Shamelessly supporting his own work~ I don't know what to write here, so I will just rant a little. To tell the truth, when I started writing this novel, I didn't have an idea of where I was going, or who my characters were. I simply started writing without any plan. And well... it wasn't a smart idea, I barely knew something about writing characters, worlds and relationships! And here I am, it has been almost six months since I started writing, and the story has nothing but exactly thirteeen chapters. A little amount compared to the time that passed, but I don't think it's strange at all since I barely knew what I was writing. But now, now it's different. What I want to say is... while the story didn't progress that much, I had time enough to think about it's world and about the characters that live there. I can't promise you will like this novel, everything I ask is please give it a chance. Thank you for spending your time reading this. Coyle~