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Pasangan remaja mati Karena ulah dewa sebagai kompensasi mereka diberi skill dan boleh hidup kembali di dunia yang mereka pilih. Support saya di patreon https://www.patreon.com/Raylight25. agar saya bisa upload novel ini lebih sering
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is there a harem tag in this???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Menurut ku narasi nya kurang. Semua akhir dari dua tanda petik diakhiri dengan "kata [mc]." Jangan cmn "kata [mc]" aja yg dipake. Coba dengan "balas [mc]" Atau "Tegas nya" Deskripsi tentang perasaan dan ekspresi tokoh2 nya juga terlalu monotone, ini membuat pembaca kek mengimajinasikan mereka dengan muka datar dan telanjang saat mereka lagi dalam percakapan. Mungkin improvise sedikit dengan menambahkan detail2 kecil? Misalnya nih: "mendengar balasan nya [mc] sambil mengkerutkan kening" Semoga review ini membantu. ~sincerely, door-kun.
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