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'It’s not over, I can do this!’
Alex Jackson is an ordinary man enjoying life when the world is thrust into the chaos of the apocalypse where every encounter is a struggle to survive. As the light flickers from his eyes, he realizes that hope is lost—when a mysterious voice presents a choice.
Allowed to continuously resurrect to a save point in the past, he must do only one thing in exchange.
Save Elaine!
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WritingWithJones has transformed into ReviewingWithJones! The writing quality is incredible, the action is really well thought out, I didn't see any typos or wrong grammar whatsoever. The character(s) are really rememberable. The story and plot is really well thought out. The world being in total chaos is a good change of pace for me. The frequency of updates is also really reliable.
There isn't much material to give a proper rating, but for now the book is a 5/5 for me. I've read all the released chapters (12) and so far it's pretty good. Things are well described and there is a considerable amount of secrecy, both around the MC and the surrounding situation. But it's still easy to see that an apocalypse has started in the MC world, and more will likely be explained about it in the future. About the MC, it can be said that his behavior is very realistic. At first I was a little annoyed that he always complained, but then think that I was irrational: The MC is in the apocalypse; dies; mysteriously revives; he needs to find someone he doesn't know; he has to survive situations that realistically have very high probabilities of certain death. So yes, his initial despair makes sense. The way the Author approached the actions and consequences of the MC is also very well done. So far, there have been no forced situations, like making things too easy, or making a situation too difficult/complicated just to put on a false sense of danger. The characters that have appeared so far seem alive and seem to have the ability to think for themselves. This may seem strange, but anyone who's been here on this site long enough is aware of the existence of novels in which all the characters, except the MC, apparently don't think and are totally one-dimensional. These characters' lives revolve around the MC and making their own decisions is a distant dream for them. Villains are also usually horrible, so seeing characters who make their own decisions and who aren't the MC is a relief. [Google translator]
The end of the description with that “Save Elaine” is making me think that the MC will be some loser who’s either forced to save a woman, or does it of his own accord, which is even worse.
Did the MC just resurrect with a system or a soul in the body? Interesting starting plot. The events are described more in detail. Eveni don't understand some parts ,it a good start. Keep going on author.
Very cool concept with a strong main character, the setting seems interesting! I can't wait to see what's next! Would strongly recommend it. :]
The story is engaging readers with action-filled chapters starting from chapter one! Very good writing and description! Good job, author 😉😉😉
The plot is really good and I love the characters. It's an amazing story, a masterpiece indeed! I hope the author writes more chapters soon because I feel so thrilled and excited with it!
Decent pacing with a concept not super common on the platform. Hopefully it idls done well and can be something great. I'm not sure what else to say.
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Knell before me. Fear me. Worship me. Put your belief in me. I am the law. And the law is me. I am an immortal. No one can oppose me. Just kidding..
I am here! Also the story is really good but since I am making this review only after reading the first 7 chapters, I can't say anything else, it has potential, and I am looking forward to it, but whether that potential will be achieved or not? Only future can tell.
The name of this story is impressive. The main characters are good. it is also a bit comic. unique storyline. keep it up author I love 💘 ❤ it and waiting for the next. And keep it in my library as well.
Wow amazing storyline , even though it seems generic but story is unique and full of a charm of its own . The things are very meticulously written and you wanna read it one full go . Be sure to check out this 😊😊
The plot is interesting and the pace seems to be okay. it makes me nervous in this type of work because you can drag on for too long but if you do it right it could be okay
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A very interesting story that has a bright future , I could only sees a few mistake and it would halt you from reading the novel, so keep it up author
Decent start with an interesting idea. Hope it continues. Nothing is particularly new, but also that's not a bad thing if you can write a decent novel out of it.
I am completely engrossed in your novel! It's a literary masterpiece that deserves far more consideration than it does at the moment. The writing is just outstanding, the plot is deftly constructed, and the characters are masterfully drawn. It's absurd that more people haven't had the opportunity to thoroughly enjoy your work yet. I'm excited to work with you to create a plan to make it more visible and get the recognition it so richly merits. Together, let's design a strategy that will present your art to the world
Please allow my shameless author review! I hope you enjoy my novel as I attempt to write something far outside my comfort zone here. I hope you enjoy it while it happens.