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In MHA as Toneri Otsutsuki
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I'll do anything to reach the top..
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(the Otsutsuki are coming)
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Disclaimer 1: I don't own most of the characters and other things. They belong to their rightful owners. I just own some of the characters in this fanfic
Disclaimer 2: English is NOT my first language so expect grammatical errors, but I will try to improve
Disclaimer3: I own the cover
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mc's backstory is bad specially the 1st chapter like you introduce him as a 'famous assassin' at 18 years of age. then suddenly an old man showed-up like 'Ima take this brat as ma disciple' then the mc goes 'goes geezer save my bratty bum please'. lost his cool when found out that he has no eyes like a lil'brat despite have a 'sensing technique' that has no need for eye sight(you sir underestimate blindness). enough of that let talk about character development. ---------------- thats your mc's character development it didn't even move an milimeter. considering the environment that he was in it is expected that his personality he should have atleast minor-to-mild anger or disgust to his parents for disowning for a worthless reason. and as an 'assassin' he is expected to be an observant introvert or an actor extrovert, those two are important presonality and skill an assassin could have considering they are 'famous' level already. and they should have enough awareness(intuition) to sense danger to save their lives. and please KEEP YOUR TIME SKIP MINIMAL! JEEZ! at these rate the imerssion of your story will be ruined and readers will start dropping. quality over quantity man
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good good good! keep up the great work, author-san! <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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keep it up boss... 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Really good novel with lots of potential and I hope that the author picks it back up again so even more people will be able to enjoy it alongside the previous readers.
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I just finished reading Naruto: With Hanma Bloodline and another good fanfic has appeared in my screen, I knew that this fanfic will be good because the Naruto: with Hanma Bloodline has 12 Chap and this have 9 so... PLEASE DON'T DROPPED THIS FANFIC
how I dislike puppets, but why should there be puppets in every fanfiction? .............................................................................
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You'll know how this goes, so....yeah five stars for me . . . #Selfove Not shameless not shameless not shameless not shameless not shameless not shameless not shameless
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this has alot of potential so dont stop writing authorrr❤️❤️. Been searching for a good tenseigan ffs and this is definitely one of them.....