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In mha as Miquella the kind (MHA/Elden Ring) On hiatus
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Mike, a 16-year-old gamer, dies in a tragic accident after a long gaming session. He finds himself in a void, where a being of light tells him he can be reincarnated. The being explains that his new powers and destination will be based on his last game and show. Mike, having played Elden Ring and watched My Hero Academia, chooses to go to the world of My Hero Academia with the powers of Rahdahn. However, the being informs him that his reincarnation will be determined by a wheel of fate, and he ends up being reincarnated as Miquella.
I want to clarify that this story is purely for fun and to help me practice my writing skills. While I am open to receiving constructive criticism to improve my writing, I kindly request that any feedback provided remains respectful and constructive. Insults directed towards my story will not be accepted.
Image not mine I found the image on Tumbler by someone named serrraphim.
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There are very few finished Elden Ring fanfics, that's why this one gets 5 stars, so please continue and don't stop uploading chapters............................
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disclaimer: im not good with english as english is my second language, and im not really that experienced with writing a review/critique writing this at chapter 10 Story Development: Pacing is kinda rush especially in chapter 10, Author could've expanded on the CPR as it's a purely original content, could've Miquella interact more with the other characters especially if he was interested in forming bonds and trust with his other classmates as stated in that chapter too that as a class president he wants to form that bond well considering he agreed on the restaurant offer, the media break-incident could be expanded well.. id let that slide because author probably didn't want it because you could have just watched/read the original series then so thats okay.. anyways from early chapters fo now it feels kinda rushed. (2.5/5) writing Quality: Theres no awkward dialogues, as far as im concerned. (4/5) Character Design: mc along with his sister are quite bland right now, theres no moment where im particularly very impressed by him for now. (3/5) World background: with japan and all and wirh the mha having a lot of things going on there, author could've expanded the story from the original to his own original fanfic where it deviates greatly from the original. overall its just the same with s few add ons. (3.5/5) update Stability: unstable to say the least, Well with authors education status its kinds unredrstable so i wont be too hard here (4/5) overall: 3.6/5 score
Me encantan los fanfic con elden ring y sobre todo nunca había encontrado uno con miquella como protagonista, definitivamente un de las ideas mas innovadoras de este tipo de fanfic espero que no la abandones y continues con el gran trabajo que haces, recomiendo este fanfic al 100%
Just Read the first chapter and I’m liking it so far. keep up the great work! 🫵🏿=🐐