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this Is a story of a man named Jack Frost who dies and gets reincarnated as Sirius black read the story to find out more
(I do not own Harry potter it belongs to jk Rowling and I only own my character Jack Frost).
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Umm the introduction to the story was good but the update speed is bad ... -You have originality when choosing Sirius, the truth already bores all the time reincarnations in Harry. -a little confusing the ability of the great patriarch in terms of magic but otherwise fine.
Just me the author shamelessly give myself 5 stars but seriously in reviews give me what you think I need to improve on and what I've done well this is my first story and I'm just trying out my skills.