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Dante, a guy from Earth, suddenly found himself transported to a parallel world with Pokemon. Not wanting to waste this opportunity, he aimed to become the strongest Pokemon Trainer.
Luckily, he obtained a system that allows him to travel to the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon world.
Pokemon reached the limit? Ok, let me just give them Spinda's drink.
Pikachu is weak to Ground-type? Sorry, I have a Zapper Scarf in my bag.
What? The Treasure Bag is full? Don't worry, I have the Space Bag with me.
Using the resources of both worlds, watch how he becomes the greatest Pokemon Trainer and Mystery Dungeon Explorer of all time!
Author’s note: The system only has basic intelligence and its main function is to only allow the MC to travel back and forth between the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon world and the real world. It will issue no missions.
Note 2: Characters from the Pokemon world and Genshin world will appear in this story.
Note 3: I want to focus more on the MC's journey and his bond with his Pokemon. Therefore, the MC will AT MOST have 4 woman (Not sure about this rn.)
The schedule for this story is 1 chapter/day
By the way, you can go to my patreon and vote for Dante’s Pokemon FOR FREE! You can also access up to 30 advance chapters there.
Check it out at patreon.com/Ked2002
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Escreva uma avaliaçãoA sincere and complete review of my personal thoughts. (Keep in mind that this is purely constructive criticism—it’s not meant to discourage the author or attack the fanfic in a negative way.) My rating for this story is a 3.0, considering purely my own perspective. From a more general point of view, it definitely deserves at least a 4.0. The writing quality isn’t bad, and the update consistency is also far from being an issue. But unfortunately, those were the only aspects I truly enjoyed. -------------------- World Background (1 Star) A Pokémon world set in our world, with real-life countries, feels extremely uncomfortable—mainly because many major countries are left out of important events, even when some of them are significantly larger than others (which would naturally make them more likely to produce at least a few high-level trainers worthy of mention). By placing the story in our world, it ends up feeling like there’s some kind of favoritism toward a particular nation or state, even if that’s not the author’s intention. And honestly, I really don’t like seeing that in a Pokémon story. The overall feeling of this world just doesn’t match what a Pokémon world should feel like—especially since it’s so underdeveloped and barely explores its surroundings. -------------------- Character Design (1 Star) To be completely honest, the most enjoyable character so far has been the protagonist’s Pikachu. And that’s only because Pikachu actually talks, has interactions, and contributes to the story. The protagonist, on the other hand, didn’t captivate me in the slightest. He feels way too basic. Even his relationship with his family wasn’t properly developed—it was just a few lines showing that they care about him, and that’s about it. And with so many Genshin Impact characters scattered throughout the story, I honestly can’t form any personal impressions beyond what I already know from playing the game. They mostly appear through mentions, and when they do get more descriptive moments, it’s usually just to participate in battles. The whole dynamic between Shinobu (Genshin, not Kimetsu no Yaiba!) and the protagonist also felt very underdeveloped, which made it hard for me to enjoy. I don’t mind whether a story is harem or not—what truly matters to me is character development and how interesting they are. If a character lacks proper depth and defining traits, I have a really hard time feeling invested in any romance in the story. -------------------- Story Development (3 Stars) The story’s development isn’t bad—I’ve seen worse—but it’s not excellent either. Again, this is just my personal preference. A lot of chapters were spent on an early-stage tournament, and because I don’t enjoy the protagonist’s world, reading about it felt like a chore. That said, I really preferred the Mystery Dungeon world. Things felt more natural and were much more enjoyable to read there. It wasn’t perfect, but it was entirely because of the Mystery Dungeon section that I rated story development at 3 stars instead of 1—at least for me. -------------------- Conclusion I personally didn’t enjoy the story, but that doesn’t mean it’s bad. I just prefer reading something that makes more sense within its own universe, rather than being directly tied to our world—especially when the source material already has its own vast and unexplored world. Unfortunately, I don’t feel drawn in just because there are attractive characters in the story—especially if they aren’t interesting and are only there to have a “spicy” image dropped in the middle of a paragraph. Honestly? Seeing that kind of appeal without proper development didn’t sit well with me. But hey, different people have different tastes. Everyone has their own preferences and opinions, so I do recommend giving this story a chance. The author is clearly putting in effort to write something of higher quality than most stories on this site (where many just rely on lust/sexual appeal to attract a specific audience). So, this work definitely deserves a shot. That said—keep up the great work, author! You’re putting in a lot of effort, and if you keep pushing forward, I truly believe you’ll go far. I’m rooting for you~! Wishing you all a great day, afternoon, or night! [img=recommend]
Es uno de los mejores fics de Pokémon mundo misterioso que he leído. Me encanta la estructura de la historia y como van por el momento las cosas. Sigue así, espero que siga con este nivel hasta el final de la historia.
No eres tu soy yo no puedo evitar sentirme raro al ver un mc que se puede convertir en Pokémon e ir de un mundo a otro así que tristemente lo dejaré aquí
so far so well, just finished to the team meanis and is a well structure of novel, and a nice theme, I like it
Pretty good novel, thought its in the early stages (CH 14) it hooked me in, I am not really a pokemon fan but the premisse is undoubtedly good, for those that have at least a tiny bit of notion of the series I recomend reading this.
I’ve read your novel, and it’s amazing! The world you’ve created is so detailed and pulls the reader in completely. The characters are really well written, each with their own personality and depth that make them feel real. This novel is truly excellent and shows your talent so well! I’m a Commissioned based digital comic artist with a knack for crafting immersive worlds and dynamic characters. My expertise lies in creating custom, high quality comic art. I will offer budget friendly prices and discounts . I also have been transform a script inspired by your story . Let’s collaborate to make your vision a reality. and I’d love to discuss your project. My work is Available on Linktree and on Deviantart . further. Feel free to contact me on discord:emily_jamess_ . Hoping for a positive response .Thanks
Autor Ked18
Author here! First of all, the game I used as my main reference for the PMD world is a fan made game of Explorers of Sky which is named: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Heaven/Hell. I only modified a bit of the Pokemon’s abilities to what I think suits them better. Do check it out if you’re interested, it’s a hard mode version with more Pokemon and moves available. The setting of this story is a parallel Earth that was invaded by Pokemons during the 1900s. I know most fanfic readers (including myself) are somewhat averse to reading OCs. Therefore, Pokemon and Genshin characters are used to fill in the major positions of the Alliance. Because I am not very familiar with Pokemon characters, I opted to also use characters from Genshin Impact who use elemental powers. Their nationality is based on their region in the game ie., Diantha and Furina in France, Ash and Kirara in Japan, etc. I only used my power as the Author to distribute some characters that can fit in other countries. Finally, if you don't know much about Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, the game basically allows ANY Pokemon to become the strongest as long as you can grind hard enough in the game. Therefore, expect the MC to be very, very OP in the later stages of the story. And finally, enjoy the story.
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