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I thought it's going to be over after I die, Turns out it's just a new beginning.
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-I hate being insulted, So if you don't like, Don't read. If you have some constructive criticism, I'm all ears. However don't come later calling me Stupid or my story trash, That is not criticism that is straight-up insulting me. I hate it.
-Don't expect the characters to be as smart as they were in the books, The characters can only be as smart as the author,
WARNING!! I will add monsters from different universes so be warned.
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I don't usually comment, I just wanted to tell the author not to get carried away by unsubstantiated or hurtful comments, since the people who write these things are people who like it and they should not leave it aside for 4 fools who insult or believe problems because they get bored
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A very good story with many interesting details. I hope the next chapters will be as good as the previous ones .............................
Great story with a lot of potential. The author for the most part posts at least a chapter a day. I'm quite curious where the story will go. I hope that this story gets completed.
first time any MC uses his head and wants to be able to summon loyal people to help him, most of them ask only for personal strength and so they need to do everything themselves, I liked the work
I'm Morrocan, Because of COVID, We go to school every other week which is the cause of why my writing is not stable. I hope you can bear with me. ................................................................................................................................................
Just hope this time you dont drop it in like the last time cause some haters and idiotic reader comment on your fiction.....................
YAYY!!!!!!SORRY THAT I'M LATE IN THIS FANFIC AUTHOR AND THANKS FOR ALL THE CHAPTERS AND FOR WRITING THIS FANFIC.............................
Good luck author keep it up.....................................................................................................................................
Thank you, could you modify the immortality part a little bit, to make it more like agelessness and high regeneration instead of full-on immortality ? it kinda makes the whole thing sounds like....a game.
Main character: a man, with self-dignity, arrogant, smart, beautiful (in short, perfect) If you're tired of rags, whiners, and pathetic protagonists, this is the place for you.
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Author I hope the timeline is still like your deleted fanfic and I also hope that he will be in Vale.....and goodluck author................
Heeeyyyyyy amigoooooooo esto está buenoooo no la dejes caeeer muy buen pensamiento general... Me gusta la incorporation de mostruos y los meteriales jajajjajaja
Продолжай писать. Очень интересно. (Сори 140 символов чтоб их)спасибо спасибо спасибо спасибо спасибо спасибо (Сори 140 символов чтоб их)спасибо спасибо спасибо спасибо спасибо спасибо
hey bro if possible can you reupload your chapters for arslan in game thrones fan fic i never got the chance to read it and im willing to give it a try you prolly wont see this tho
I LOVE THAT IT'S NOT HAREM, THAT'S ALL I GIVE YOU 5 STARS [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Liked it. cant wait for more...............................................................................................................................
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honestly, pretty good story, but not my cup of tea, in my opinion, the character wasn't developed well enough and the guy skipped 16 years of training, and in my opinion, memories and experience are two very different things same with knowledge, so not training for those 16 years your self without specifically wishing for certain things, is not all that realistic, and the character is tooooooo over powered and completely upsets the balance though you can fix that quite easily by doing some world building. so this is my opinion thus far.