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HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.
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"When did I sign away my wealth to you!?" Lockhart asked, shocked.
"That's the neat part about it, you don't know.", Loki said with a smile.
"Hmm...I can feel it. I can feel the power coursing through my veins." Voldemort said as he felt his face after his rebirth. "Huh? Where's my nose!!!?"
"Obviously, I have it! Do you want it? If you want it you need to praise Dumbledore!!" Loki said with an innocent smile.
"Lord Voldemort does not need to listen to yo- Dumbledore is the greatest wizard of all time!!" Voldemort said with fanatic eyes, creating confusion amongst the death eaters. 'What!? Why am I saying this!? What did he do to me!?'
"Who are you!??" Dumbledore asked calmly.
"Me? Have I not introduced myself yet? Please call me Mr. Error." Loki said with a smile while adjusting the monocle over his right eye.
Read more about Loki's adventures as he walks through his years at Hogwarts meeting and scamming an array of famous personalities that have become infamed in the world of Harry Potter.
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Good story cool ideas but story overall: Mc doesn’t know the world he is in nor have any understanding of magic / HP kinda get annoying when he says it 100 times and demonstrates that over and over again…. He let himself be murrdered and beaten down with his sister threatened and almost raped. Mc doesn’t look to have any guts or understanding or plan forward it is all riding on beyonders and lord of mysteries Great set up for what you have
MC doesn't know HP..he only knows LOTM...MC gets pass around beaten like a dog and get away by plot armor..this repeats throughout. if you're into MC's that gets beatdown then plot armor saves him..then this is for you. in short he did a ritual cause he wants to be isekied then he did just to suffer.
It's an excellent story imo, as this is my first lotm x hp read and you may find the story boring or edgy in the start but it gets better and we do not have much world building as of now but so far it's good and the incorporation of lotm and hp verse is also going well... the update schedule is also quite good with more than one chapter usually... I would recommend you to try reading this book
the first few chapters felt like a slog but after that it just got better and better, at chapter 30 I couldn't wait to read more of this. i love the concept and the way the author combined the world's. to the author: if you need help or ideas for stuff like the rituals be sure to ask us readers or just look up ideas on the internet. I'm sure that can get pretty difficult.
It's a good read, but it's marred by the protagonist and frequent errors in details such as continuity errors. The worldbuilding and stability of the updates are really good, but unfortunately it's all marred by a protagonist who starts out with negative intelligence in the first few chapters, literally betting his life and a likely fate worse than death to find out whether the world he was transmigrated to was or wasn't LoM by speaking the true names of various deities and beings to see if any would show up to kill or torture him. After that he continues with several acts of negative intelligence, although this finally improves around chapter 50 and his intelligence increases to 0. At some point he finally reaches below average intelligence and more or less stabilizes with some moments of peak intelligence or stupidity. So although I really liked a lot of things about this fic and intend to continue reading, I can't give it a rating higher than 3.4 due to the problem with the MC's intelligence and the continuity errors.
Ok so I'll be honest here the Start may be a little bit rough since he doesn't have any knowledge about the HP verse and thinks he is in LOTM but it gets good from chapter 10 I haven't seen any grammatical errors or anything like that here and mc isn't someone that goes I'll become Ash and gotta catch them all type he is cautious and does things that is actually possible and doesn't become powerful in day 1 and the side characters aren't brainless idiots or anything like that So all In one I would say this is one of the best LOTM X HP fanfiction on this app So thank u author for this
in starting he knows about Harry Potter World and lord of mysteries but overtime shows he doesn't know about Harry Potter novel like he doesn't know Cerberus is hagrid pet but if read the novel he would know in starting few chapters with the black matriac he shared his knowledge of Harry Potter
Не варто витраченого часу. Головний герой ідіот. Персонажі-просто декорації. Весь світ крутиться навколо бажань головного героя, він не отримує ніяких негативних наслідків від своїх дій. Діалоги написані так, ніби автор ніколи не чув як розмовляють реальні люди. Нікому не рекомендую це читати.
A unique crossover of HP and LOTM, one of the best LOTM fanfiction novels I have read that isn't a Translation. 10/10 for me. I'll give it a 5 star in everything except world background which I gave a 4 star since much isn't written yet about it.
Really good crossover between HP and Lotm, the novel is at first but I see the potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story has good LOTM/HP the main character is quite enjoyable to follow so far the story seems smooth as the author has structured the story quite nicely. My only issue is the pacing can feel a bit slow but it’s fine if you binge read the story. The update stability is good as the author is consistent with it.
unlikable character and worse after reincarnation/transmigration. background way too edgy in the 0 8 15 random standart bad starter way... so yeah not really worth it story and characterwise
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Review: Quality (3) | Stability (4) | Story Development (2) | Character Design (2) | World-Building (2) The first ten chapters were relatively enjoyable, with some writing flaws and an occasionally irritating protagonist, but it served as a decent casual read. Unfortunately, the story started to decline after that. I follow the "rule of three strikes” on bad stories, and this story hits all I. Forced Character Actions:The characters often feel contrived, with decisions made to serve the plot rather than develop naturally. II. Poor World Integration: The mix of settings between LOTM nd Harry Potter was mishandled. I would’ve preferred a clearer, more consistent world-building approach by stricking being HP or at least introducing the LOTM more gradually. III. Overly Forced Plot: The story's progression feels too artificial, with key events like the MC’s accidental encounters, a sudden death of a potential adoptive parent, and the mentor’s untimely demise all leading to an abrupt introduction of a lady who expected the MC’s arrival, has heard a prophecy involving him, and who is also apparently a High Sequence Beyonder. This was honestly the one that ticked me off the most. The rushed pacing really detracts from the narrative, and all the “hints” and “foreshadowing” are awkward and offer no sibstance to the story — far too superficial. A more effective approach would have been to gradually introduce some aspects of LOTM, rather than overwhelming the reader with them early on. In comparison, THE DIRECT INSPIRATIONS, Harry Potter and LOTM subtly build toward their prophecies over time, which creates a more engaging and immersive experience than this fanfic. Overall, while this story isn’t for me, it’s still an improvement over some other works, like that dawn awfull **** **** stupid Isekai Dimensional Cube novel (I hate that novel).
I'm really surprised tbh, this HP x LOTM fanfic was good. The only downside was MC is not smart enough, okay maybe because i always compare him with Amon but yeah my fault. Thanks for the fanfic tho
nah this mc doesnt know about harry potter when lotm are like ant compare with hp . try ask someone if they know chinese novel lotm or world class like harry potter . even 8 years old know harry potter . this mc are just retard and live in mountain with only webnovel app aviable. super dumb he a real kid like shelter kid that know jackshit about the world and never watch movie too . like if he read and watch many story he will atleast be carefull when doing thing but this guy are think about something small and he like stood there when thinking he weak and had no idea how to fight back how to survive he so obsess with chinese novel a real super fan I cant remember all pathway like mc like how the F did he growup he prob been shelter his whole life ... but this author writing skill is good but mc just retard and unlikeable 3.6/5 for writing quality and updating stability
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The best description of the novel is that it is relaxing for the nerves. The original Lord of Mysteries novel is a novel that makes a person extremely nervous while reading and makes you wish for any slice of life to calm your nerves from all the tension, death, sadness and sacrifice. That is why most readers love the chapters of the Tarot Gathering because they are calm and relaxing after all the stressful events. My evaluation of this novel is that those who love the amount of tension, sadness and action situations that come one after the other in the original novel will not like this novel, and those who are tired of scenes of action, sadness and death one after the other will love this novel
(honestly I can't judge this is bad or good) in Harry Potter: you will be able to get magic power as long as you have a wand and magic talent. in lord of mysteries: you can become by drinking a potion or being blessed by a god.
1. Heads up for newcomers The MC, Loki, doesn't know the HP Plot, but a lot of LOTM lore. The beginning can feel sluggish and weird, maybe even annoying at times, but give it time until chapter 10, that's where the fun begins! Loki doesn't have a cheat in the traditional kind of way... no system, no goldenfinger, no wishes. Instead he seems to be the only Error Pathway Beyonder. Also, personality wise, Loki feels like the love child of Danitz & Amon. 2. Review / My opinion So far (star of year 3) we still haven't seen much of the beyonder world, but it has started, I reckon this year is the prelude to beyonder shenanigans. The incorporation of Beyonder into Wizarding World is greatly executed. The interactions and bonds between the supporting cast and the MC feel genuine and well done. A little bit of plot armor here and there, but that's also a bit of "Adam's" fault. xD There are a lot of similarities between Loki and Klein, paying homage to the "original" by taking fan-favourite mysteries, names, items, etc. The story is highly addictive! I'm really bad at this but yea... TL;DR - Give the story at least 10 chapters to get you hooked. Follow Loki, the personality love-child of Danitz & Amon, on his shenanigans and adventures to liberate the money of other people, while living Ash Ketchum's wet dream by petting all the XXXXX-Creatures along the way! Highly recommended, but sadly severely underestimated story. Dunno how to end this, sooo bye?