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[GACHA ROLLING... CONGRATS ON WINNING: GODHOOD]
The above never happens lol.
--This is a AU and a crossover--
--Don't own any characters or shit like that--
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I like the story by the way it goes but there are a lot of things that I don't know how to explain and they just happen and the little jumps and the capital letters become annoying especially the capital letters
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I tried reading it but the grammar and formatting is terrible, since I couldn’t get to far into it I will put everything else at 3 which is average. Which is being generous, fixing the formating should be the first thing done to improve.
Concept is good, but delivery needs serious work. If this was a student's work I'd give it a solid D+
This need a humour/comedy tag... And it’s not that funny. More annoying than not. For a reincarnated person, the protagonist is quite lacking in savyness.