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Hermione and The Genius Magic Formula (Harry Potter Fanfic)
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The boy who can decipher all and any kind of magic as if they were formulasーーLeonard Taylor.
Captivated by magic, the boy used all his talents to research and overturn the common sense of the wizarding world.
No one knows what influence his research would have on Harry and the dark wizards.
Note: This is a translation
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Short ver: author didn't REALLY know HP Long ver: Before reading this you need to know that the world author envision is not the CANON nor AU.Let me explain, it was fine from the first couple of chapters, it's not good or bad. It goes down the drain straight to the sewer when author decides to imprisoned Hagrid 5 years in Azkaban simply because he hatched a dragon egg. Let's think for a sec, if just by hatching a dragon egg and raising it for a couple of days could get you sentenced to Azkaban; imagined what will happen to death eaters. As Hagrid get away (alive) from his previous crime (Voldy's scapegoat) because of Albus and we all know the centre of that old man attention is Voldy's and his cronies. The folks at ministry of magic is not all corrupt so... There would be no war or even if the war really happen only few households would survived the purges. It was them against the European W&W Society after all. Or maybe grindelwald didn't exist and that makes it the first war against the FIRST Dark Lord. DO read it first, maybe you will like it or loathed it like me.
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New review, made when the story reached 33 chapters. The author said that the book was translated, but still the writing is sometimes very weird. Lately, the author is not using the correct tenses and, the way the characters talk is very weird. Here's an example: Hermione and Leo are talking alone and Leo says: "Hermione doesn't need to move the wand that fast, Hermione should move more gently."
I liked this fanfic, but it became stale very quick. I'm following other author's fics, but they have the same problem. It's not fun, there's no comedy relief and that's why it's became an average fic in my eyes, sorry.
It is a really good story so keep up the great work ! So I am giving five stars because it is really good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A short story, but a complete one nonetheless, for that alone its worth 3*. The Translation is nothing special, with a lot of mistakes that break the immersion, especially the ones where the Translator mixed up the MC's name with Hermione's name. As for everything else, while research oriented and teacher MC's are my absolut favorite type in any setting, the MC's personality is so dull and boring that I have nothing good to say, except the attempt to "remove" Harry and deal with certain events in his own way.
The story feels empty, even boring, there is very little to say about the rest, there is a clear lack of progress and the story feels like it is stagnant.
This is a really great story and it is probably one of the best I have read about the Harry Potter world.
The story is engaging with minimal errors; however, the author seems unfamiliar with proper grammar. It appears as if it were translated directly from another language without accounting for grammatical differences.
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The narrative of this work sometimes races ahead, leaving behind crucial details for character and plot development. The over-reliance on the protagonist as the solution to all conflicts detracts somewhat from the depth and suspense of the story. Despite these shortcomings, the overall storyline remains engaging. Would I read it again? Perhaps not immediately, but it certainly provides a pleasant diversion for those seeking entertainment during a lengthy journey.
HONEST REVIEW!!!! This story is a Completely new take on Harry Potter While it stays true to its root it changes many things that makes it diffrent compared to other HP fics. The only real issue is sometimes to translation is messed up but the whole story is readable compared to other translations. 9.5/10 would reccomend
It's a very great and unique Harry Potter fanfiction!! I really really love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great and interesting (although short) plot/storyline and quite good english/translation (you always use the opponent names when talk. Like Leo says "Hermione" when he talk with her, you can use "you" instead).. And grammar is good too.. I like how MC/Leonard is focus with his research then interfere with story.. I love how MC/Leo is friend with Hermione since before Hogwarts and later become lovers (not that I hate Ron, but Hermione is too good for him.. They so different, like fire and water).. I also like that this story show how Harry and Ron is many difficulties without Hermione with them.. It also so different from original story, like Philosopher Stone trial, Lupin and Sirius still alive, Hagrid fates, Umbridge dissapear (this is my favourites Umbridge fate from many other stories), etc.. There're many thinks I don't like about MC/Leo (like he's too cold/eliminate any his enemies. Love researching magic so much that he don't care about others, like he let Voldy ressurect to see the process. Etc).. Although I understand why he's like that (he's researcher and don't care what others think about him. He also don't know much about human psychology, like it's fine and normal for him, but not for others), I still don't like it.. I also agree with him so much about kill his enemies, so they don't come back to hurt his family, lover, and important person later.. There also don't much appearence of Harry in this story, he's like secondary/supporting character in this story (Dumbledore appear more than Harry in this story).. But I understand, because MC/Leo not have many interactions/encounter with Harry and Ron.. Love your story so much author sama 😁👍😍😍😍
It's very dry. Nothing seems to really happen, everything is practically just stated and the character itself which could've have been interesting is bland with very little personality.
Ignore me, I'm Just Doing the Tradition. Also English is not my first language so I kinda afraid to start this project, but someone said: You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step.” — Martin Luther King Jr.