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Nathan Blackrose finds himself just on the verge of enacting his revenge. After years of devotion and suffering to build his company from the ground up, he was betrayed by his "friends" and co-founders. They were going to launch the product of his genius, the world's first VRMMORPG, as their own. Several years and countless hours have passed since his exile.
His entire existence has been devoted to the design, coding, and testing of his new project which would be the most in-depth VR game launched in history. He didn't desire the title of first anymore, just "The Best". As soon as he launched Celerin, the shadow lingering after the betrayal would be severed and he would stand at the top of the world. Just one more bug fix to go.
"Would you like to enter the world: (Y/N)"
This choice would forever shape him as he was pulled into the world he created, not as a player but as a god.
Chapters One to Nine are edited. More to come.
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This needs to be read. If you are browsing novels, looking for something good, you NEED to read tbis book. By far, my favorite novel so far. It has an interesting, origonal story, where the author is doing something not usually seen. Great character design and growth, and a world story that makes you desperatly want to know more. Stable updates with an author very generous witg bonus chapters, and great grammer and editing. Honestly, truly deserves 5 stars.
Among all the novels on this site, this is my favorite. It has a constant updating and good development of the main character (in my opinion), and so far I have not been disappointed in anything (almost all the novels I read have had disappointments in some parts). And also the author has a good contact with its readers by the discord.
The idea is great and creative. Gramma and sentence structure is good... Sadly the title is very misleading. Cuz mc is the exact opposite of every word the title means. God ? Yes as in name and race as the novel describe but truly is a slave to the system (The system even deducted his precious points cuz mc was rude, it was an attempt bof comedy but sadly is not funny at all) Game designer? Yes the novel describe him as such but he doesn't even think like a game designer/creator? His actions are similar to that of an air headed person that want to get instructions what he need to do. Seriously, mc should be despairing not accepting the outcome and even thinkbof scraping after he is disconnected from the game as if he forgot his 7 years of hard work. Also, the game story back ground was written in a way that it didnt even reach drafting stage... Basically, this is like an isakei mc who receive a cheat system with some word play...
Alright, this is as of Chapter 41. The updates are stable, and if you are on the Author's discord, you would be aware of the fact that he has a backlog, just in case something comes up. The writing quality is okay. I found a lot of minor errors, but it doesn't distract too much from the story unless I'm looking for them. The development is interesting, and you can clearly see the main character changing, growing to accept what happened to him, which leads to character design. So far the characters seem well designed, and they seem to have a reason for their actions, which is far better than the alternative. The world design is great. Due to events that happened, even the creator (the MC) doesn't know everything about the world, but he knows enough to inform others, and you can clearly see the amount of thought put into it. I recommend this book to everyone, and I hope they all enjoy it.
Bad story. A ‘God’ is forced to walk with humans and no one saw that as a problem? For a “Creator God” to act pathetically weak like that is humiliating. Betrayed by an AI to be stuck in your own game? Because it’s for “his own good”? Would probably be a good story if he is not a ‘God’(a Creator God no less) but he is, so it made the story look illogical. It doesn’t make sense.
While the writing is good the logic in the story is extremely poor and unless you like a dark comedy where a created being claims to be helping her father but instead keeps screwing him over don't read.
I love it the plot I don't know if it's an original plot type cuz I've only read like a 150 light novels so I don't know but I believe this can go far I read the first 3 chapters I love it so I wish it can continue best of luck and work hard
Didn't like it. Story is boring and very little happens. Pacing is also slow. Grammar is ok, but the writing method is annoying. Author will write a scene from a POV and then rewrite it from another POV, only adding the thoughs of the other character. This happens all the time. For f*cks sake, do this only if a scene is really interesting and the other POV adds a lot more detail to the story, otherwise is just plain filler. Wanted to read more before writing a review but was already to annoyed at chap 29.
This Story is Awesome!, Have a Small siimiliarity between this Story and mine, well that's not important This Story will be Popular in the Future that's for sure, One question no I mean Will it happen?: will the ML have a Cup of drink with his Creations? YES! or Yes?^,^ (I'm Haiper today Bo ya!)
Weak Overpowered MC just stupid. No character development. Just basic stupid MC with a overpowered system that downgrading him, giving him title that not even funny like The Fool and more stupid titles. The author force comedy that gone wrong when yoU read this feel how stupid the author is. And there a big plot hole that his a god and you never feel it one bit. Even his followers downgrade him God to DemiGod, How stupid can you be? I feel the author try to nerfed him in a wrong way. You can't nerf a God more or less his Creator God its like saying Superman get punch by a normal human and die. Not recommended!
I just like the story and I want more chapters so I decided to post a 5 star review. I don't know what to write about really, other than I like it. Read it for yourself to understand what I am talking about.
I only gave you this score for the 130 chapters already written. I really can't stand your lack of logic, he's supposed to be a programmer, rational, calculative, take in account of risk, rewards and possibles outcomes (I'm a programmer, so believe me when I say that we must see beyond a ****** fix and contemplate future changes). So I read until 16th chapter, but I couldn't take it anymore. Let's recap: >Arrived at his OWN game in real life, into an arid desert. >Has the user interface only with faith system added. >Went to "people asking for a god for help". >Display his power, killing a dude soooo far away with a bow that requires practiced skills to use, stopped 10.00 arrows in the air like matrix ****....Worst of all? He didn't even know he had those powers but somewhat he is already masterfully using. Also, he wasn't even shocked that he could do that. >Everyone was awed at his really long cock so he has now points to do more deeds to even more worshiping. See the pattern here? >Already gained a demi-god bow at chapter 13. <<His long-term/short-term goals? Not even explained the readers supposed to know what the **** the MC is thinking <<Shocked about him being in the game? Not even mentioned <<Worried about people killing him? already covered dude, has a demi-god bodyguard (obviously female and next in line for a harem, of course) and a demi-god weapon in chapter 13th. If I were him I would go to a big city, convince the mayor and do deeds left and right and I will gain infinite points...for what? Idk he already has infitit powers and some specific powers on the system. I don't know the goal of this whole novel. TL,DR: The entire system lacks logic and it's flauty as hell. The MC has no goal and no intention of explaining to the readers what is he doing and why is doing it.
Revelar Spoiler Though well written this story isn't worth reading unless you like a bad comedy where the created being that claims to be helping her father just screws him over.
Great novel Great author Great story World a bit lacking in explaining, as you have to wait for a few chapters to understand it. But when it's explained it kinda makes sense, and leave you wondering what else will happen
Trash, so many fillers that i could die from boredome, the side characters overshadows the mc and they're not even interesting, and the mc gets treated like trash by its creation? and get points deducted from him cause he just said something stupid? why do authors have the fetish to make the system abuse them, like are you brain dead, and when it was already so bad the vampire tries to attack the creator himself whilst knowing so, like is it retarded lmao, if its humor you're going for then i'd say its 0/10.
Review plus rant The plot is good and I have no problem about that.. BUT story development is f*cking frustrating it is immersion breaking asf Chapter X MC rampages the city and ends in a cliffhanger (reviving his daughter) Chapter Y expect to learn what happen.. what you get? side characters story about trades next chapters about that? Fillers. lot of lot of filler chapters... It is about side characters flaunting their skills and this annoying character interaction tldr it is about fillers and mood breaking chapters.. this chapter and the next makes your waiting time for a chapter a waste..
This book is quite enjoyable but has a small problem. its missing watermelon and i know this might be strange to say but i expect that at least Nathan understands my view!
I like, very good, original, good writing, nice characters, good plot, now I'm just putting words to try and make the 140 character margin to post a review
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Good at the beginning, but feels rushed as of chapter 9. How many cliffs did he smply jumped off? I understand that the people he's protecting are in a ravine like place with an exit and entrance and that he was watching from below and jumped down next to feya, but then he goes to jump off another cliff, and like what's going on here? Please explain the environment little better. I wish you success in this novel cause it's interesting!!
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Hi All. I'm the author of this novel. This is one of my first works as a writer! I hope you do enjoy and please feel free to comment below or on a chapter. I will try to respond when I can! Also feel free to join us on discord. We don't bite sometimes. https://discord.gg/Ap9KZkQ