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Foundation Of Talents
Autor: King_Of_Choas
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Throughout the world's beyond the one of the story one name still remains scarred in the memories of Gods and demons [A Elrod] the founder of Edo and the Elrod family
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Overall it being your first work is understandable. The Little bits of Information before the start of the chapter was Good touch as it allowed us readers to understand it a little bit. But the chapter seemed to be a little bit to short and overall the tone was a bit rushed and just the atmosphere was little different with the characters reactions being bit bland and not expressed to well, but overall it decent for a new author, Welcome to World of Web-Novels!