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#_-+fi9khedu875edxhii
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why did you delete all the chapter the story is already good why did you dp that why why why wwhy why author San write it again . rfds
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I am giving my novel a five star rating because no one one is giving five star rating. So i have to do this in order to motivate myself. All these are just excuses, so don't take it personally. I'm just giving 5 star because I'm way way way tooo shameless.
to me grammar or spelling really doesn't matter, it's perfectly fine if you're not good at English. The main problem was the formatting, dude you put speeches side by side, to start a new para you used space instead of newline which made the whole story incomprehensible. alteast to me right now the story has no meaning as i couldn't even read. do format the chapters before uploading new ones. you're already spending time and giving effort writing this story but all will be for nothing if people can't read it. best of luck man 👍