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More than 500 years have passed since World war III, A war that changed everything.
Humanity has long since recovered from the war's effect. Many human lives were lost, in return they also gained much more.
But the Scars of war remains. Monsters and Beasts roam the Earth, and many places remain deadly due to radiation. Still, humanity stood firm and was able to persist and even surpass their ancestors in terms of science and technology.
One day! A boy receives the greatest gift in the universe, in the form of a System that can produce factories. Now everything he needs is within his reach. He only needs to grasp this opportunity. But it won't be so easy, as he finds himself surrounded in a quagmire of conspiracies and attacks from powerful gods and demons that are trying to spread chaos in the universe.
Follow Arc in his adventures to uncover the secrets of the System and the universe, while creating a safe haven for him and his loved ones.
PS. I'm doing this by myself, and I'm no expert in English, so don't expect much. I'm just doing this for fun.. if you have any suggestions let me know every bit of it helps.
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Vote........vote.......vote .......vote..... Love it......love it.......love it .......... I can't even describe the awesomeness of the book so I am not expressing it in words................
First the story is awesome..... Grammar is good and the character building and world background are the most "Noticable" Best quality in this book as the author is trying exhausting his all to create a fullfilling book for us to enjoy... Let us review and vote the book so every other Dao friend can revel in enlightenment .......
Its a good novel with good story. Author have a brilliant idea. You gonna find it more interesting as the story progress. If you find it not to your liking about the grammar and so on. Please give author a change and try to be patient. It start rather badly. Not the story but the grammar and how there are too many symbol and dialogue that are in the same format as narative. But as the story go on. The symbol became better(less) and grammar became more readable and also the dialogue get more in position. But overall the story is good
Story known op story. If you are like the op story you can read but editing and english so bad to read.
Love it..... A hidden gem..... Everyone read it... Love it..... A hidden gem..... Everyone read it... Love it..... A hidden gem..... Everyone read it... Love it..... A hidden gem..... Everyone read it...
Poor character development, One dimension side characters, Overly OP and plot armor, Bad grammar... The author needs to think and plan on what he's going to write. Like, stop now and plan the plot on the novel. Eg. It starts on a post apocalypse world that turned a large part of the world to a wasteland and mutated beasts, then goes straight to human fleet fighting aliens without any development... I don't say to scrap it now because the idea behind the novel and the factory system are great! This is pure gold on my opinion. But it's a mess at the moment.
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I love the story and kingdom building! I also enjoy how the mc is op. Some may dislike it, but I think it's perfect. I also enjoy how quickly the story goes, since there is a lot that can go on. This keeps it at a good speed so that readers don't get bored. Keep up the great work. You are doing great!
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It’s pretty good stable updates cool background decent story bit of funky grammar only issue is kinda flat characters. Definitely a decen book I would suggest you check it out.
The first 15 chapters have OK grammar, after that, it goes to shit. Readable, but still shit. The story is OK and the system is a bit too OP. Characters are also OK. Pls get a better editor.
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Why it has too low readers I mean c'mon it is a best noval about business and war and I did not seen a noval soo much good.
This is one of my favorite novel. I really love the world, and the MC is good too. If you haven't read it yet, then read it! I recommend it
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OK so the novel itself it pretty good the character development it good and the character nearby the main it amazing too but it update kinda slow so it a drawback.
I really don't understand how it only has 4.3 stars and so less viewers I . mean this is the best novel I have seen in a while, for people who think it's about business war and blah blah blah, it's not. it's about a guy named arc grand who works as a labor due to his parents being in coma nad he has to take care of his sisters one day after returning he gets a factory system and he builds his empire, and people it's a very simple novel with really limited fight and blah blah, the only thing the mission are like 10 chaps I bet u can adjust, I truly recommend , it's a hidden gem.