Emperor and Dragon ( A Black Clover Fanfiction)

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SirDtheMan

Hi everyone, I'm the co-creator of this fanfic. I know it's a little shameless to comment on my own work but I hope you guys enjoy the different twists we have in store for you down the line. p.s. whoever can guess the identity of the mysterious god(he is another manga character) we'll let you make an OC character to join the cast. all in all we just hope you guys enjoy reading as much as we did writing it. don't worry you can get attached because we won't be dropping.

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James_Parker

Love the story and characters so far I really like the dual protagonist get to see the story from more than one perspective i really like it that way keep up the great work.

I like how this is dual protagonist so many shows make a good rivalry just so one can lose but this has a fun beginning and I hope for some more romance

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Edgelord69

I don't know why but the story is not for me, I can't enjoy reading it which I think it is because of the two MC thing. In the start it is equal between the two, then in the middle the one because he is smart he leaves the other in the dust besides the comuncations between the two are unnatural from my perception, from normal high schooler to power up competition? I pity the one who got one piece set btw, he is like in the other mercy all the time lol I love the concept but at the start but the development is not to my liking, so just want to add this to my library to read later.

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Legacy_24

I absolutely love this fan fic dual protaginists so they can never be the complete strongest and the seemless blend of so many different animes is insane. I dont know how you pulled this off but it is easily one of my favorite fanfics on this thank you and keep up the great work

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Jonathan_Randle

For anime fans you should definitely give it a read it has a great story and lots of action I really enjoy reading it!! I like both main characters great writing

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Comalet

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The_11th_Division

This the author I know you Are struggling with the dual protagonist. But we wanted to try and create a new mold .p I want people to see the rise of the protagonist of both sides a web/light novels. But I promise that will make it worth your wild. Its action and romance but don't forget slice of life

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TwistedUExile

we need more two rtagonist fanfiction out there, so i hope eeerybody can take advatage of this and do something simmliar..........................

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Amataratsul

So far I am truly not a fan of this fic, although unlike many other reviews I will attempt to give an unbiased and fair review. The first point of this fic I have to say that I believe adds to this fic is the two protagonists, which the dialog could be better spit out and clear, but also allows for the two authors to make two completely different characters with each element of each character being different and yet also mixes well. Another point I like is how you can clearly see the different personalities, like reading one piece where all the characters speak to the heart of the audience, although sometimes this goes too far in the split and makes you wonder what has been worked on by who because some of the dialog feels forced for the plots sake, such as the first meeting in the clover kingdom. My first real criticism is rather contradictory to my last point and that is how dead some of the characters feel especially the main characters from the original anime, like Noelle. My last point or complaint even is how the story skips alot of world building elements or even when they are their they are dry and just bad descriptions and don't give any of the magic world building should, it feels like everything is bent round the characters not round the world, with some attempts to make the world feel alive just being spoilers or just bad attempts that make the world feel synthetic. Thanks if you got this far. And if you disagree well I really don't want to waste my time on you because of a review.

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FOX_ZRS

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haremphobic

You should give mc new rival one that also wants to rule the multiverse cause the dragon will not help him grow in my opion a waste of a rivalry

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6Bingus9

I'm not sure if this is dead or not, but so far so good. If it isn't dead, then I look forward to more chaps if its dead then oh well. Another one bites za dusto. Also, not sur but the God seems like Ego from Blue Lock. I dunno if someone else guessed it but, yeah.

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The_11th_Division

The story is something that me and a fellow author worked on we worked hard and will have a great release rate remember in black clover we were only shown a continent there's a whole world out there. I would love more reviews and rates even if you hate it tell me why .