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Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
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Yohan was a game maniac. He loved playing the cultivation game that was popular on Earth, and he was one of the famous players in the action genre, but unfortunately, he died while crossing the road. Truck Kun Hit him at a lightning-fast speed.
After dying in an unfortunate accident his soul transmigrated into a world dominated by cultivators, Destiny played a cruel prank on him, the body he Acquired belonged to a trash dual cultivator who belong to the famous clan with no influence.
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No doubt good story potential but my man get a editor or someone to check your grammar. That is the biggest weak point of this book. But other than that keep it up.
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grammar is bad, but i like the story. Please use some kind of grammar app or something like that it is really annoying (sorry for my bad english)
The story is decent but the terrible grammar just takes away everything it had to offer. Even basic things like names are forgotten from one sentence to the other, almost no sentence is grammatically correct. It's insane how people give this story 4+ stars for writing quality... I have the feeling, that the author doesn't want to edit his chapters or he doesn't realise, that this looks like a soup of letters.
It very much impressive and it very understandable and it a mind blowing story well the story is fantastic and it reliable ,I would love to be a writer just like him to write my own story so people can also read my story Very much impressive keep up the good wor
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I would say that I am having fun reading this right now despite some of the writing errors however the big downfall of the novel for me is that the story progression is too slow. I know that it is a new novel but taking more than 5-10 chapters for a scene to progress is kind of annoying but all in all it still fun
somewhat good from the start but later ison in the story, mc will become s7tupid which are the cases of some novel that has overpowered chrcterstics and strng backer in it. he doesn't think about the consequences of his action which is stupid. he always creates problems. if only in the story some of his love ones died and mature that is best. so overallthe story is okay the plot is okay, only mc has iq problem.
Aside from the obvious problems being the grammar( which at the my current chapter 221, has gotten much better then the beginning) this novel is actually really good and fun to read honestly author has mentioned repeatedly that hes not a native English speaker and also cant hire an editor so I can't be too harsh considering the story is really good and intriguing mc is good, a little weird in the beginning but once things gets rolling he becomes much better. some of the FL so far are a bit generic innocent lovey bombshells (diya,jasmine, natasha) although diya's character is becoming more interesting recently with her plot developments the backstory with xiao feng and mc and the past forgotten by mc is also pretty interesting All in all if you can look past the grammar and whatnot this is really a hidden gem that has potential enough to trump some of the "top rated" swill on this app Great Work keep it up !!
hlo author can u tell me why r u writing filler chapters at least 40% chapters recentely r fillers and these chapters r also very short at least increase some words count
Good story and characters but irresponsible mc that doesn't think about the consequences of his actions and just says "i'll handle it" when he clearly isn't capable of handling some of the enemies he's making. Story also progresses really slow because of filler and multiple perspectives- in some mini arcs mc is only in about 50-60% of the scenes- but it doesn't feel slow until you realise it's been 200 chapters and the story has barely moved. The writing quality is like a good MTL. Sometimes words are used incorrectly completely changing the meaning of the sentence. All sentences still make sense if you just change a few words in your head while you're reading it. Meanwhile, the author's favourite colour is blue.
So my first impressions of this novel were actually pretty bad. Aside from the fact that it all reads like a first draft with zero editing, I was expecting an immensely cliche power fantasy. But, I will admit, the story has grown on me, and has actually surpassed my expectations. I've read all the way to the current chapter, 316, and am sad to be caught up, I was enjoying the binge read. A big reason why I am liking the story so far is it's somewhat slow paced. While the MC does belong to the OP category, the plot has made it so you really don't see that. He actually spends half the time struggling because he gets involved with things way above his level. Trust me, when I say the story just keeps getting better, and you get more invested in the characters as the story goes on. I strongly hope and advise the author keep putting in the effort to add more depth to the story, and especially characters. And certainly do not neglect the romance element. It has actually turned out very wholesome and I really like the few female lead characters introduced so far. Just avoid the terrible pitfall where they become damsels in distress who exist to rely on the MC and show no personality. That would be a disgrace to your writing.
I enjoy the story but the number of errors in the writing itself is atrocious. I understand that many of these stories are translated, however, that does not excuse the lack or capital letters or other punctuation. Please also work on defining when someone is speaking more clearly. I missed half of a conversation because I thought the MC was talking to himself.
i really like this book/novel and even though the grammar and English is not perfect it still manageable
I won't complain about the spellings and all, overall matter is the story is hilarious . Continue with your stories. I can't wait for more.😁😁🔥
mr.author... i like this book very very much so please try to update everyday 2 chapter like you do months ago. Thanks for your hard work . ......god bless you.......
Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
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if you want to read something lewd and funny, this novel is for you... i love the mc he is smart, funny and very op... its new novel so its don't have many chapters... but hope we will get more chapters soon...i love the other novel which called snake evolution system... written by same author ...