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Douluo Dalu: The Abandoned Child

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Autor: Zentruz

4.42 (25 Avaliações)

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A soul from our world reincarnates in the Douluo Continent. However, he soon learns what it feels like to be abandoned and left to die by those who gave birth to him. From that moment on, he vows to get revenge on his parents.

Excerpt of the book:

Uncle Xin clapped me on the shoulder, his grin wide and genuine. “A 6-year-old Spirit King. You’re a monster, Bei.”

Grandpa’s expression softened, a rare moment of sentimentality crossing his face. “Our family’s rise begins with you,” he said.


English is not my first language, and this is my first Fanfic, so please be patient. Any recommendations are welcome.

I don't own Douluo Dalu (Soul Land).

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Ansh_Sahni

I like it so far even if it is machine genrated language it has all the things i like fast growing mc and op from the start and an evil mc who does not even think for a second before killing. And the best part is that he does not even hide his strength in front of others

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Rak
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bro became level 54 before age 7 .within a year of awakening . i can't anymore

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IbzTank

can't wait to see his revenge and the impact he has on the main story line 👀

2mth
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MercenaryRollen

more please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Sultan_Iskakov

Интересно история но очень быстрое повышение силы расстраивает А так хорошо и интересно ¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Для лёгкого чтения подойдёт

2mth
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Dennis_Tanton

Can’t wait for your main character to meet his father and mother and how they will interact

1mth
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Yuhanathan

Magnificent. This word sums up everything, context, development, writing, characters and especially a badass protagonist, all of which together with the Doulou world, made one of the best Doulou stories of Webnovel (in my opinion). Author, please continue with the story, I sincerely ask. Thank you for your hard work, author.

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Idlawyl
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Mid at best. Writing is fine but plot development is forced, things happen for seemingly no reason, like a group of peak soul king bandits attacking a little kid just to introduce Liu erlong. No one questions this kid despite having all the reason too. The interactions between the Mc and side characters is super cringe. Can’t say I’m a big fan but I’m sure it’s just right for some people.q

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Daoist011970

Awesome read, fast flowing story but not to fast with op mc who doesn’t follow tang san and has a goal other than simply becoming a god or making a harem, this is very refreshing. There is also, as of yet, no force romance just because author liked one of the oc so that is a big + for me. I recommend, it’s a good read 👍

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Joao_Pedro_5293

Muito bom!!!! Continua assim, definitivamente um dos melhores livros que já li, adorei espero que o MC só tenha um interesse amoroso (não gosto de harém) nada pessoal, obg por nós trazer esta história autor

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1mth
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I_Null_I

a question do i need to know the original story to read it? ( the . last time I read the manhua was like 3.5 years ago and I hardly remember the plot )

2mth
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Wide_SHOT

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Vicky_Yun

author Is this your own fanfriction, if not row name

2mth
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Unhonored

A good fanfic, I normally like fast paced fanfic's but for my taste it is too fast. I wont read it anymore after 30th something chapter but if you like fast paced, OP mc almost from the start here is your place

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Shellfish_1024

Great read! Some elements that I avoid like an edgy mc but in this story I gave it a chance and it turned out good.

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Aarav_Gaur

Very good story line, and the language is also perfectly fine even after using AI. I really hope that you continue this book. Looking forward for next chapters

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Master_Z_1773

Wxcellent story, highly recommend it. MI

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Wide_SHOT

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Igor_Oliveira

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Kilaske

Other than the ridiculous speed of cultivating this fanfic is actually great. The least this could have is 3-4, but definitely not 2 and below. Can't wait for MC to get revenge on his biological parents.

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