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Doulou Dalu:The Forgotten Legend

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The disappearance of the Divine Kingdom of the Doulo Continent affected the course of the history of their world, which headed into an unknown direction. Shenglin, a boy who should never have appeared in this world, imperceptibly influenced him. But as it turned out, his connection to the world is much stronger and deeper than that of others. Will he be able to ascend to the top of the world, becoming a god and write his name into history, becoming a legend. We will find out in this story.

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kosmas_kosmas

The story takes place in dd4 timeline also the mc is supposed to be a reincarnator but by ch4 he has forgoten all his old memories making it pointless.The whole getting adopted arc was the same

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blue_cookie24

Overall story is very confusing, Said he is a reincarnated, but slowly lost all memories & acting like a blank child but suddenly had his values & principles saying " I will not learn from someone who doesn`t want to teach", also I noticed word choice is not that good, "I prefer to learn from someone who is genuinely interested in teaching me, rather than feeling like I'm just an add-on. I don't want to disrupt their learning dynamic with Xuanyu, so I'll not learn from her.".... this kinda seems nice and make sense; also this story only focusing on Xuanyu (mc of SL4) and mostly comparing our mc`s action with his...chapter length is good, need some heavy editing for errors like Heavenly Doe, & Celestial Dou. or other dialogues, good thing is that there is no CN MTL flavor. Again feel like MC is just an addon the original story

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Shahzar

the mc is just a dog who is just a copy of lan xunayu what lan xunayu wanted to he do the same doesn't have a character of its own

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Warlock12

Bom...............................................................................................................................................................

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