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A story of a SI born in a millitary family in Krypton who has to make his way to Earth before the planet explodes which isn't easy as a 10 year old.
SI without a system.
CW Supergirl universe.
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Hi, I am the author of Dio El and I thank you all for your your support for my story. This story is about a self insert into the world of DC/CW universe. The pacing is a bit slow as I like to expand on characters and the world around them. For all those who are fond of DC characters I will try my very best to make them as similar as I can as portrayed in the media and their writers. On a final note I do not own DC and CW and they belong to their respective owners. I am someone who just wants to write a story about my favorite heroes. Thanks, Prananjay
Started out great.. but after Mc reaches earth, it all goes down hill like a train wreck, it has hardly any build up in story or relationships, Mc becomes an absolute Beta. And it's hard to understand wtf is going on which is pretty annoying..
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This book has a lot of potential to become a great book because it has been amazing so far the only real problem is the slow updates but it's better than nothing book like these are rare amongst fanfcitons I've read so far
Great story so far. Really liked author’s take on Krypton and the hidden part of their society. Just wish the updates were more frequent.
I like the fact that MC is trying to save Krypton, which is something different from other fanfics. I generally like a ruthless MC, specially in DC/ marvel worlds, but this fanfic teaches us that we are humans, not because of our blood, but because we have humanity inside us. Thought it wouldn't make a difference in our world, but from the novel's perspective, it shows how vivid author's imagination is. I hope that there is no harem and MC+Kara would be best.
The main character for this story it is Super Beta and it seems to be only a side character in a story about everybody else. He is literally the weakest Kryptonian ever. The author keeps trying to tie in unrelated things to the DC Comics Universe, even wants to create an original villain. Considering he can't even create an original main character that's something.👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
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This story is very slow comparative to other fan fictions which has done the story very well so far. it does seem as though the story is progressing in a way that it will become one of my top 10 DC fanfics. The only problem is the stability of updating which has recently became once per week but we the readers would love far more chapters to read and enjoy. (╥╯﹏╰╥)ง
What started as an interesting plot device, having the MC be a Kryptonian, has turned into a very bad story by author. First its the grammar. There are too many inconsistencies in the writing and formatting to be comfortable when reading it. Too many simple mistakes that it seems the author is too lazy to fix. Then we go to the uninspired and quite frankly lame conversations the author writes. We do not know how the characters react in the conversation and you can be lost while trying to read them because they are just lines without even the simple: superman replied or said or anything similar. There is zero world building that is not already there from the comics. I stopped reading because I could not take the stupidity anymore. Unnecessary decisions made by the MC and just zero interest in the story anymore. Do not waste you time reading this.
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Amazing story hope see more chapters unique And made you waiting for what is going to Happen............. .................................,,,,,,,,................... .......
Everything about this novel is great, The only problem is the updates interval.... So in my humble opinion, just delete this story.... Or stock pile chapters before uploading it... Just my opinion, Anyways dropped
The main character's personality is none existent. It would be better off if he had iust dashed his head against the wall the moment reincarnated
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The story seemed good to me even before the MC came to earth, after that it seemed to me that a lot of MC fell. This in the sense of the power that he should possess, how much depends on his machine and his adoration for Superman, I understand that he may be his idol, but this is very, very ridiculous. With his power the problem that I find is that it should be more I think, if you had not said that he was there for years, he would understand it, but he was there for years, that he did in all that time that he did not dominate his body when he already received the training bases Kryptonian. Good with its lack of power comes its dependence on the machine. I will follow the story to see if it improves since the first chapters were a pleasure to read. **: take care of the virus
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Why are you so insistent on saving Krypton! It is pathetic and should go extinct!!! And Kara almost killed the MC and his response is Okay!!!!!! MC has human emotions in the body of a kyptonian with emotion repression but this is too much!!!! No rage that he almost died again!!!! OKAY!!!!!????!!!!!! Seriously!!!!???!!!! Yeah I was reincarnated as a kryptonian. Oh, I almost died because Kara wanted to test a rumor. Cool. Doesn’t matter. And why nerf the MC since the start. I mean nothing goes for him at all and anything he does lands him in more trouble. I mean if I imagine myself in the MC place, I would kill myself because of how depressing this sh*t is! Nothing goes for me, almost died from a rumour and no emotions and control over my fate even though i can have so much power! I usually don’t write such reviews but this one just got under my skin so badly! I mean it has so much potential yet fails so spectacularly!
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