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Devil's Pinky!!!
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"Let's make a pinky promise. I will be sure you have what you want, and your heart will be wholly mine then."
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✧°~ (This book is my first project! Send love by leaving your comments ☆)
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Impressive story! I really enjoyed this book. I really like it. The sentences are arranged so neatly that the reader can feel the plot. I don't really understand punctuation or grammar, but to be honest I like the writing style of this author. Keep up this good writing!
Excellent! I like the flow of the story, it is very slow-paced but I found myself enjoying the descriptions and the way you presented the plot. I felt immersed in the story from the beginning and as I like the romance kind of stories, this got me hooked very fast. I am learning a lot from you. I will keep your novel in my library waiting for more updates.[img=recommend]
ssfx3yuchens here with a honest review. I liked the plotline and how the information was presented, vivid descriptions and clear presentation. Will be back for more!
excellent display of descriptive, vivid words dear ❤️🙏🏻 hope to see more updates bcs AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ❤️
The story is very endearing and well written, there were a lot of amazing metaphors. While reading I always felt as though I was sitting under a tree on a hot summer day listening to the hum of the cicadas. The story flow was sometimes a bit bogged down by the vocabulary, although I can always appreciate that. The only thing I would comment about is that the character interactions sometimes felt a bit fabricated or robotic. As this is a Romantic story at its core, I find it somewhat detrimental to the story, so I would definitely reexamine some of the conversations. Otherwise a very smooth read.
Very interesting!!!! The story's well written, and the beginning was superb!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to more updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story is very well written and easy to read. I've had trouble with the names but that's because I am not used to Chinese names. The author expresses emotions well and there are parts in the story where I feel inspired because of how they described something. Keep it up and enjoy writing!
The plot is well detailed imo, the characters add an interesting touch to a well known world background, the starting point of the story already prove that the development is going to be something to look forward to 🥰
Story has a very interesting plot. Descriptions are very vivid like you are there yourself experiencing it with the characters. Progression of the plot is just at the right pacing. Some parts keep you wondering (which is good for keeping your interest in a book). Overall, the novel looks very promising. Hoping to see more.