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Main Character ( Jian lin ) loses his family and his life at last in power struggle and ploys of his own family members and his close associated friends.
Jian lin wants revenge, he was selected by system ( demon slaying system)
"Ding, host has been selected for Demon slaying system "
"Ding, host has obtained the rights to become a player , does host accept "
''Ding, host has been allowed with 10 seconds time to consider , failure of acceptance leads to perishing of host's soul in myriad number of realms "
" Demon.... Slaying... System?", "Host....? "
" Well, as long as i have my revenge , i can sell my soul to the Devil or can become an demon itself "
Jian lin has to prove his worth to system by completing certain tasks and trails with other candidates that were selected by system to become an Demon slayer.
Can our mc finish these trails ?
Can he compete with others ?
Is there any hope for his revenge?.
Stay tuned !!.
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Notes :
This is first novel, and english isn't my first language, so there are few gramatical mistakes that can be spotted in my novel, but it gets better as you proceed through next chapters.
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Release schedule :
At alternate days, bonus chapters, either at Sunday or Saturday.
During exam times i may take small breaks from updating.
During vacations, i will release daily to compensate the chapters I had not released during exams.
Don't just look at the grammar mistakes and throw curses at my chapters, The chapters will be rewritten by me slowly and be updated as later times, so please have patience.
Well the story is mine, but the cover belongs to the artist.
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Escreva uma avaliaçãoInteresting, funny system, child prodigy, reincarnated MC, wuxia to magic world, mutants and demons, nice story and world development should vote 5 stars but author seems to be new and have little difficulty in grammar, but well it's a good story and a different concept
Revelar SpoilerIt's understandable , the mc died in one world and reincarnated into another , but the reincarnation is not free , he must prove his worth for reincarnation, so he must finish missions arranged by the system to pass it's tasks and reincarnate. Yeah new concept.
Revelar SpoilerActually I'm new to this webnovel things and I don't know weather my review will be taken seriously or not, but after reading this novel I have seen a new category in Reincarnation-system based types and the McDonald's has been reincarnated to different world, the story is like an Chinese to Europe cultured or we called wuxia based and system based types. But it's cool, and well a nice one at that but the problem is the category of +18 but only few scenes are depicted to beatured ones, so expecting a great Lewds are not present." Demon slaying system "update it daily lol will ya.
Well let me be frank a few points about this novel DSS that I fell I must tell the readers till I had read. Things seen in this novel demon slaying system A reincarnation of main character. A fantasy world ( elves, demons, beastmen, giants, etc) A system based novel ( levelling type ). A Child protagonist ( a prodigy type ). A school or academy pursuing based . A mysterious background ( unknown ). A good story, and author has to improve grammar or hire an editor. A new thing is that a author had made a wuxian based character into an Eastern fantasy type. And another new thing is that system sends him to multiple dimension to conquer and finish it's quests or missions before he was sended to his reincarnation. Cases of mutants and variables with much strength and powerthan ordinary cases are seen are seen. A funny system, who sometimes makes pranks in MC.
Hey there Mr author, update more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Let me be say, yeah I enjoyed it, I hate long stories, takes too much time, tough few grammar mistakes as the beginning it's not a problem when we compare it with the concept in the story it's good, and I hope the update will be as steady as he's doing , plz provide bonus chapters at the end of we which makes sense, and not in between, and five stars since I wanted to sincerely support this guy. More importantly don't get burned out lol, author ╰(*´︶`*)╯╰(*´︶`*)╯╰(*´︶`*)╯
Hi Iayn lui, first this is a cool novel, as far as I read, wait spoiler, like he gets a system and others are cliche, but his adventures, story and encounters are solid bro, first he died, later few quests, then went for a new adventure with a brand new world, underestimated at first, but got strength to slap their mouths with shocks, child protagonist a good development. I hope this author continues the same pace.
Revelar SpoilerI have a note I want to say to my fellow friends and readers, this novel it seems to focus more on a tag called child protoganist, the past life, as Jian lin in Mark White body at second life, introduction of system tough appears to be cliche, but has more to it, the explanation of new features, world background, his research could not be tossed aside. The authors makes few grammar mistakes I had difficulties at first chapters, but ain't the cases on the preceded ones, now at chapter 30 his grammar got too better than before, I can understand what he was trying to narrate, yes each author has his own style of narrating which gets prominent later, it takes time, maybe his first novel, but well a good novel, go for it. I hope author can make 300+ chapters, keep updating, we readers will read it for ya.
Though there are some grammar mistakes and typos, this story is like a translated novel. The content and direction, this author obviously had done his research and/or read a lot of chinese novels. He also updates chapters daily and constantly, so don't worry about it being dropped or not updating suddenly. If you're looking for a good system novel to read, try picking this hidden gem up.
5 stars, support the author, nothing much nothing less, ain't I cool na, good story nice development and nice updates. If we talk about genre reincarnation and system
I really liked it at the start, it seemed interesting as the plot was really good even at the beginning. Basically, a girl messes with the supposed ‘MC’ before poisoning him and turning him into a mindless and lifeless cripple. He then attempts sui- but survives because of his sister and father. The father fights with a grand elder and wins to get the resources to save his child. But in return, he has to go to a forest and train killing demons. He does that and flash forward 5 years. He comes out of the forest at his peak, all strong and stuff. However he gets jumped and betrayed by his friends who got sold out. This part doesn’t really make sense, he had a ton of power, and was a supposed one-in-a-10-thousand, but then he gets beaten by these weaker people. The excuse is “poison.” This part is weird but still alright. He gets kidnapped and wakes up, apparently the grand elder is the one who planned against him. He bought his friends with cultivation pills. Still... Alright. Turns out that the grand elder had lost everything to him, his son in law, daughter, power, everything. So he got revenge by going after the man and his family. WARNING! REALLY MESSED UP AFTER THIS! Basically he goes after the guy’s family and butchers them and decapitates them and stores their heads so he can show them to the guy and create despair. Legit, the guy just grabbed a box and opened it, showing all the heads. This part is gore, but, its still alright, nothing too bad to make you throw up. BUT WAIT! DID YOU JUST JINX YOURSELF? BECAUSE LEGIT IN THE NEXT SCENE, THE GRAND ELDER TALKS ABOUT HOW HE DID IT ALL. This part was really gore in my opinion, but it’s still alright... just calm down and don’t explain further. JUST KIDDING LOL! GOTTA MENTION HOW I STALKED THE LIFELESS CHILD AND BUTCHERED HIM INTO A MILLION PIECES BEFORE FEEDING HIM TO THE ANIMALS. At this point I was really contemplating my choices to read this, but eh, I’m not one to get to angry or have a weak stomache/ mind, so I was still alright at this point, just please don’t keep going or mention any ra-. LOL YOU THOUGHT! TIME TO GO IN DEPTH ABOUT HOW I USED A DRUG ON THE DAUGHTER, TURNING HER MINDLESS BEFORE RA—ING HER AND THEN BUTCHERING HER. LOL, IK BUT YOU ALREADY KNOW I’M NOT DONE! TIME TO EXPLAIN FURTHER. LETS GO! At this point I legit felt sick, Author, I’m truly sorry for this, but why the hell do you need to go in depth about ra-? I really liked it at first because it was interesting, the butchering part didn’t get me, I was slightly confused about why you would go in depth about butchering, but it was alright. Then you mentioned drugging and ra-. Still alright, but why the hell did you go in depth about the ra-? I understand maybe it was for the revenge, but still, you could hav just left it at... that. I didn’t care for the details about the butchering but the ra- details really made me sick. Anyways... Then he dies and swears revenge, then he gets the system and... yeah. Btw, sorry for long review. I just felt I had to warn the readers. i am not sure this is the last time this is used, I didn’t read much more after this, i think it’s still really good and you should try it out. This was basically an explanation of the prologue and the start. No hate, just a review on my opinion. Bye.
Revelar SpoilerSo, I was able to read the whole story in one go. This shows that the story has potential and the chapters are long, unlike some webnovels these days. Although the system seems cliche, it's actually better than most of the novel's. Hope the author will continue it.
This novel demon slaying system is very interesting! It isnt your typical reincarnation story where you have a MC being reborn in a different world! Not only is the MC reborn after death but also gets access to a unique system that has many other users and is not exclusive to the MC. This is a unique aspect of the story as most system novels have the system being exclusive. Also the system in the novel is not a sweet system, it gives ruthless trials to the MC who nearly dies every single time before clutching a win at the end and obtaining the rewards for that trial . Other than that, the world building is quite excellent and is not easily predictable even to veteran readers like me . Also the characters are fleshed out fully and not one dimensional. The antagonists are not stupid either and infact rather smart. So you're sure to enjoy this novel . As for the cons, the only issue is that English isnt the Author's first language and the novel therefore has language errors which is totally understandable. But for those of you who are thinking the novel will be unreadable, I can assure you that if you can get past that which I am sure most of you can , since I was able to read up to the latest chapter and enjoy the story inspite of being the type of person who doesnt like mtl or stories that are unreadable! The author puts great effort into the story and I implore you to give it a try and be pleasantly surprised:)
Revelar SpoilerI love this novel and just binged all the chapters however I think that the pacing,especially in the beginning chapters,could have been handled a bit better as it felt like we were just going from one story to a whole other part of the story in just one or two chapters without clarifying anything. However I love this story.
This is the first eastern fantasy novel I've read. The characters and the main storyline seem very interesting and well developed. I like how the author manages to give importance to the secondary characters, making them an integral part of the plot. Over time this novel will continue to grow, I'm sure of it!
IDK, author starts with some gruesome betrayal but the guy functions like its sunshine and rainbows and just starts having more kids with more wives?!? He is basically an old man and makes dumb decisions left and right?!? And personal opinion, ****ty systems that exist to put the MC is ****ty situations just feels forced instead of an actual story. I mean this is good if you want to pass some time but the story development is rushed with important character building aspects to make room for the MC being treated like trash for no reason? This could be good but the themes between a dark MC that is capable and fights the good fight and just a dude being pulled along by some by a bratty system is not set and needs a bit more work.
Revelar SpoilerThis novel is very interesting, with the addition of several unique characters inside. The system provides a sort of modernity with the MC’s level up function. The only problem here is that the grammar and spelling may be erratic at times, so I advise the author to find a proof reader of some sort to help with the process. Overall, I would recommend this novel for someone who likes system novels.
I enjoyed the read. The author was able to grasp my attention from the beginning to the latest chapter. There were grammar slips but it didn't wane the interest in reading the story. Don't judge the story based on the earlier chapters. If you stick longer, the story gets better and the author's writing improved a lot. Give it a try.
Great system cultivation novel. The writing quality is very good. Little to no errors that were ignorable and didn't affect the flow of the novel. The characters are well fitted to their roles from the little that I read. Good characters means good novel. The storyline is also developing nicely. I particularly love the world build up, a xuanhuan novel with a perfect world settings. A gem in the making. Kudos. Please, keep it up.
Autor balubalubalu666
Hi readers i am balubalubalu666 author of Demon slaying system. Five stars, not because i am shameless but because i like my work and does not want others to think that even author himself is not confident in his work, so why would I. I want to make a schedule that readers may prefer as the statistics on my dash board, provided by webnovel suggests that uploading time between GMT 3 - 4 pm is the best, maximum number of readers are preferring to read my novel. I will upload my chapters on alternate days. Bonus chapters, I may upload them on Sunday or Saturday . Tough my first few chapters have few grammar mistakes, I will try to correct it and also improve the quality of the content as I proceed to next chapters. This book is my first work, plz bookmark it of you like my work XD, that will support me very much.