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Demon Guardian in the Multiverse
3.74 (28 Avaliações)
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The first novel so don't be too hard on me. Will read the critics.
Just writing this novel for myself. If you enjoy it ??. if not criticism so I can become better.
Our unlucky MC dies accidentally was put to two options.
Option 1 Realm of Warriors
Option 2 Reincarnation in a World the Godking wants him to be with the power the Godking bestows to him.
So no free beans for someone interfering in the work of his wife.
OP from the Start. System only shop and mission. Can't show real power because of society in the first World he is.
Don't own anything of this novel just my OCs and a little plot. Pic isn't mine too.
Warning: Irregular chapter but I will complete at least the first book. It may take some time.
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I will be honest as I didn't understand a thing since i don't know the first world. So it is hard to understand it as there is not much explanation about the world but other wise it is good enough.
Someone will explain to me why a hero is needed here if he does not change the canon? He doesn’t even betray the ENT. ...................... ...................... ......................
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Dude it’s over!!! 😭😭😭 I loved it! From start to finish! This novel was something I craved for everyday!!! Such an awesome story and I hope you continue writing!!! Just gimme a new novel and I’m all for it!”. Huh, I don’t know who to give power stones to now. For such a long time, I have been giving it to a new novel and now....
The story is primarily wish fulfillment. That's not necessarily a bad thing; but you meshed together a seemingly random array of power systems. A good wish fulfillment story should strive to make a unique character; rather then give him a host of random abilities. Given that's usually an issue I can tolerate most of the time. My second issue stems from the writing quality itself. Generally with writing quality I look at spelling, grammer and flow. First while it probably wouldn't hurt to go over everything with a spell checker; nothing particularly sticks out to me. Grammer needs some serious editing. You have some very poor sentence structure. I would highly suggest Grammerly. Now I would normally judge flow separately from Grammer. You can have good Grammer but bad flow. However bad Grammer tends to make for bad flow. My final issues stem from unrealistic character interaction. It's one thing to tell a close friend/family your past world. It's plain stupidity to drop that bomb on a complete stranger. What's worse is that he picked the absolute worst world to drop that bomb. In a modern/futuristic world setting I could understand. The concept of multiple worlds isn't entirely alien in such a setting. However he chose to drop that bomb in a world stuck in medieval times. Worse it's a world where magic and religion are very intimately intertwined. That's a horrifying level of trust and blind stupidity. That's not even mentioning the fact- That the being which sent him there may not want to spread this information; nor catch the attention of other such beings.
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Good story, well written my only issues are that your main character Logan feels more like a side character to which protagonist of the world that he is in
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Writer definitely isnt a native english writer. Lots of grammor and identification errors but Ill give it a five simply because its the only world travel fic with uncommon world choices
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I have played both the dragon age series and mass effect saga ( andromeda doesn’t count) and I’m so happy that they have a novel here on Webnovel you my friend have a fan for life
sorry but this is the first time I am giving 1 star to someone because well just no it was good the first chapter and the second but then you decided to tell someone he just met that he is from another world that was just so dumb idk what you did think as you wrote that it just killed and ruined the story for me .
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