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Waking up in Tales of Demons & Gods, surviving is one thing Leroy can do. After living as Liang Yu in Star Martial God Technique, he is able to pass off as a decent person when in this type of Dimensional setting.
When he feels like it that is. It is a slow process to change things but it has been done before.
Can he build a Safe Heaven in time while making sure those he cares about gain the strength they need to come with him, or will they fail like the others before him did?
This is a Fanfiction that will have elements that do not exist in the original series. Events will not take place the same as several interactions for Nie Li. Which makes since he is not the person the reader will follow most of the time.
Conversation hat was not covered in the original will be shown with different outcomes than the original author/artist wrote.
Because it is a fanfiction which should be kept in mind. If you want no "forced" content, read the original.
No profit is made from this.
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I haven't read previous novel and it might be a reason why I don't understand some things in this one. Writing quality - overall is ok, but there are some misspellings. Story development - it's quite weird for me. MC tries to develop a force when he clearly doesn't need it. his speed of growth makes that force useless. also MC is way too op. he can change people's talent, convert corpses and materials into cultivation and many more. Character design - all the characters fit their original personality from TDG very well. All but MC. He lost his wife and child in previous world, but his behaviour is quite childish and weird. He shows off for no purpose, sometimes helps people on a whim(especially people who might turn their back on him), sometimes he thinks about killing Nie Li and then does nothing.
I'll give it the benefit of the doubt and say it's a good read. But man can the mc be frustrating, and the stuff with how he goes to different dimensions along with the African Pantheon stuff is hella confusing
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if you ask me about how this novel is I have one word good no racism and just early novel feels like mc force to form a connection with other characters but after leaving the family I feel like mc now mysteries for others and the reader story pretty well good there is also sci-fi no harem for now (hope future mc have harem) and mc behave like eren from season 4(AOT). as for my expectation, mc should ask for sci-fi AI or weapons(like terminator nano suit change science) to help reform the world because I never see any science in any other tales of demon and gods fanfic novel.
I wonder if the author will be writing more. I really liked this. The premise of the MC not being Nie Lie or an SI but Shen Yue is promising
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Its realy nice. The mc seems sensible (some thinks seem a little rash but it needs to be done for the long term) and its well written. Good Work
Me pregunto con quien se va a quedar el mc pq par3ce como si se parara de las posibles opciones. Va hacer de una sola pareja o va hacer haren quisiera saber para preparar mi corazon.
The story is extremely intresting, but the english needs a lot of work! Common mistakes the author makes are writing *no as *know *too as *to *the as *teh and a few others
The writing quality is terrible. The only reason this has a 4.4 star from me is cause i couldnt read enough to actually tell how everything else was so i just gave it all 5 stars. It reads like the author barely knows english, doesnt have an editor, or it was machine translated from a different language. If you can power through the bad grammar then give it a read as i dont really know if the book ks good or not.
This is pretty good i havent gotten far in the book but first off the beginning kinda confused me i had to reread to understand what happened couldve given a better start off but Other then that its good nie li the original mc was confused in the story he was arrogant bc he knew everything i want to see how this is gonna change lol
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Like all the others this is really good, this guy is a superhuman, like how does he write so much ? He is a monster and his ffs are the proof of that, if you didn't already read, GO !!!!!
This is a good fanfic, I'm looking forward to the development of the story, and I hope the storyline will be more interesting in the future............ ........................I look forward to the continuation
Besides the obvious plot holes the author creates. The story is meh at best. Mc tries to be mysterious but for some reason, the author makes him an idiot. So many things the mc could do but instead does nothing or does something half way, hurting his own goals. Really disappointing since it had so many chapters. But if you read it, so many people dropped it
The Mc moves from SMGT to TDS and has powerful techinques Like his ruthlessness as he immediately devours Shen Yue's Soul and takes control of the body completely making it his own body in the process You gotta give it a try