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The balance of the world collapsed when portals opened up to different worlds. Humans were granted systems to hunt the beasts in the Otherworlds. These beasts could give the Hunters their Codes, granting them special abilities and weapons.
In this world, Allen was born with an incurable disease that rendered his throat unable to utter words. He could only produce hissing sounds that made the other Hunters to bully him relentlessly.
He was the freak without a family.
But his world had shifted when he accidentally killed the lost beast and gained its Code. The Code of the Primordial Snake, one of the strongest beasts of the Otherworlds.
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okish novel.... better than many translations, but goes downhill after chapter 30 where he is trying to act some sort of hero or instead of simply selling codes goes and wastes 10 chapters or more in city. He should be busy training, farming skill points , lvling up and collecting rare codes. Things happene for MC's convince and 30% of novel feels like filler ......
Peltivierre makes the daring choice to kick of this series with action at the start instead of a more subtle character introduction scene. Since there are so many elements to introduce in the beginning, showing the story by narrating how the MC became a hunter may have been a more effective way to gather the interest of the readers. Unfortunately even after starting the series, the chapters only consist of non-stop action from chapter to chapter instead of focusing anything on character-building, world-building, or story development. There are a number of grammatical errors where past and present tense are mixed up, which is quite jarring. There are also some instances of throwing in future tense as well. One way to improve this series would be to incorporate more imagery, describing the various sensations the MC is feeling. It would also help to describe his emotions and feelings in detail, so readers could connect to him more. Since the MC spends a lot of time, more detail could go into describing survival in the wilderness. Thus far, it’s heavily glossed over. Although this series starts up decently, it quickly comes to show it has nothing but action to substantiate it. I don't know how it changes later on, but it lacks a lot of substance.
the idea could be interesting but the novel is poorly constructed, full of inconsistencies and grammatical errors and above all plot holes. the protagonist is an idiot
Later in chapter 13, the MC will become a slave or a subordinate, even though he has the power to become a ruler. Should have been able to explain this is not why I gave *1 ? .It's useless if the writing is good, the setting is cool, etc., if the plot is sloppy, bad.
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yea i deropped book as soon as he was no longer mute what is the point of making him mute in the first place there was no point just a grab for more attention.
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I liked the start but the story goes downhill as it proceeds. The ML has snake code but he does not have any quality or show any quality. He is always led by his nose by other people. Snakes are cunning, lazy sharp and cruel and they do not possess any of the qualities even after the snake code changed his body. Moreover, the author just confusingly mixed technology and codes. I was at first very interested but after reading till chapter 50, my interest was lost! The whole novel introduces new ideas suddenly in some chapters to carry forward and the character of ML is poor, coward, cautious and extremely weak and have no knowledge about the world.
I read up to chapter 14, story was fine, there was quite a bit of grammatical mistakes, and between chapter 13-14 a character completely changes personality without warning, and forces the main character "ie plot" to do his bidding. Overall, not that optimistic towards the story.
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I first found this book when it was free for 24 hours. The first 5 chapters were pretty ok, they were introducing the character and the system, as well as some details about the world. It also highlighted the beginning of his adventure towards power, his goals and motivations, which was great. It starts going down hill when he meets the boar orc, the second rare grade creature. At one point in the story it says that ordinary objects can't harm these beast and then he ends up killing the monster with a tree. I also have to mention that the fight scenes are pretty poorly described, I'm never able to get a picture of what's going on, I was only able to glean that he fought, got somewhat hurt and in the end somehow killed it with a tree. There are also some parts that I find really ridiculous, like when for some reason he feels the need to con someone who cared about him or the fact that a character just blurts out all his thoughts and worries to someone he deems a stranger. In reality people don't just blurt out the whole truth of their problems to others who they meet for the first time, at most they would give a vague outline of what's wrong. The character is also pretty dumb, at one point he goes on a tirade about how despicable others hiding information about their powers is, when he's also going to end up doing the exact same thing, it's kind of common sense to keep important information to yourself. Overall, the concept and beginning is good, it's just... everything else that's not great. Too many inconsistencies and nonsense.
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I feel betrayed, the synopsis says that Allen was born with a disease that makes him unable to speak, he is basically mute and is an orphan because he lost his family early, when I read the synopsis I thought he was a homeless person very young, but when start reading the guy has claw scars on his throat and that gives the impression that it's not a birth disease that makes him mute, but that his voice box was ripped by the claws of some beast and the guy has already finished high school and is became a hunter for lack of choice since he couldn't find a job, the synopsis is more interesting than the beginning of the story when I started reading '-'
so at first I'm intrigued by the title and the synopsis and the story seems good but then suddenly takes wrong turn in chapter 13, I get it that the protagonist still naive and such but believing that he just planted by some nano tracker in his blood by someone and agreed to become guard/pawn just so stupid. like is he doesn't have common sense usually people will probably attack since he's alone anyway and the fact he already said he's a support just makes it worst, is he afraid of his background? I just can't comprehend it. I will try read more and probably stop when I seen any very stupid decision like this one and hopefully there's none
The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author can’t stay on track with the characters goals.
Alright , I read the book til the cap 14-15 and those chapters killed me like why would the Mc let himself get stuck by a lie ? Like it was a good book by that point, the fact that he lost the handicap of being mute killed it a llitle bit but those chapters killed me, I will read a few chapters more but if there isn't a good explanation I will need to drop the novel
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Honestly. I enjoyed the beginning but then there are some critical things that don't make sense at all. His power level is inconsistent and literally don't know anything about how strong he is compared to others. World building also doesn't make sense as well. Ascension isn't described properly so clueless regarding that. Basically Mc is as strong as the author wants him to be at any given point so you always have no clue how strong he is.
அவரது உள்ளங்கைகள் ar esweaty முழங்கால்கள் பலவீனமான கைகள் கனமான அம்மாக்கள் ஸ்பாகெட்டி அவரது bervous ஆனால் நான் அவர் அமைதியாக தெரிகிறது மற்றும் குண்டுகளை வீச தயாராக உள்ளது. மொத்த கூட்டம் மிகவும் சத்தமாக செல்கிறது
Figthing and keep uo the good work author💪. Waiting for the new chapters to come. I hope things will get more interesting and more new chapters to come.
Dropped within first 15 chapters. MC is blackmailed by a person saying he is from A terrorist grouping and will turn him in if he doesn’t follow his commands. The thing is MC is not so why would he just go along with it. An example would be a random person on the street walks up too you and says your a terrorist give me all your money or I will report you. Are you just going to give it too him? No you tell him to F off.
just disappointed, the novel has an unbelievable potential but the author does not manage to sublimate his work and tell a good story with these damages
honestly not that great wish they would stop putting this in the free to read so often it's like ehh why not that enjoyable and not that interesting story can be nice or drawn out or completely off the topic of the subject
Honestly, hard to place this one. I've read 7 chapters and in that span, the MC has gone from unable to speak (a pretty cool handicap) to able to speak. MC got a great power which he wants to keep secret for good reasons, but then a chapter later thinks poorly of other characters who got a similar ability and kept it secret. MC wants to be powerful, but also wants to leave his destiny to fate instead of trying to get stronger on his own. MC wants to be careful, but then does risky stuff and almost dies several times for no reason. If the author would choose something and stick with it, this *could* have been an interesting novel. This wishy washy stuff doesn't work for me, unfortunately.