Chronicles of the Martial Guru

This is actually the first review I write; (I caution that I am not a native English speaker); For 2 reasons I urge you to continue: you seem like a person smart enough to create a good MC in a good story and so far your writing ability promises. This is only my opinion and advice, but features of your personality (and origin) are noted in your writing; that can influence the proper development of the character (we are never objective towards us); I may not end up liking history over time; BUT the classification based on the potential it has shown and the gregare to my bookstore. I am really nobody, but I am very selective for my library, and the main reason I added you is because I wanted you to continue and better, you may not achieve the best with your first novel; but surely you insist you will achieve a lot. I recommend you: 1. Do not always seek to please readers, I do not mean not listen to advice, but you decide the direction of the story; but as readers we hope that you lead us in that direction and that it has been planned. 2. Try to give release dates and plans you have. 3. It is optional, but if you want to create a faithful reader base, create intimacy by telling a little about yourself in the comments, or discuss your ideas and explain a bit in comments at the end of a volume or arc. You know, I really hope you can continue (hopefully you have motivation and your time allows it); Hopefully more people can give you encouragement, since I am not the only one who hopes to find good stories on this platform. From a boring reader of generic and effortless stories, I hope the best. NEST_