Castle Of Black Iron Fanficted

Hello Friends. Good day to you all.

This is my first try to write a novel.
I'm using this fanfic as a media to practice my skill.
I'm going to use my own character while changing some stories inside for practice purpose.
Please give me a lot of review on this so i can learned my deficiency and i hoped i can continued to grow and present an original novel of mine soon.

Thank you.

Sincerely Me