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Dear all,
Thank you for the support you gave this book.
But I'm REWRITING this entire story to suit a bit more mature audience.
The story is almost the same, but the premise is a bit more mature. Hence, I don't want to mix it with this book that was my innocent adventure here.
Please find the new book under the title, "Threads of Crimson and Gold". I feel the current title doesn't do justice to the story line.
Thank you once again!
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The story takes place in an average rofan world that met steam-punk? The story really started only after Barnaby was introduced. I enjoyed the character dynamics, especially in the military camp. I don't know if it is because, it is a slow burn in terms of romance (not much so far). The MC is a golden retriever. His father-in-law could be the second ML (he just showed up and he is like my fav character now).
The story shows promise, but I feel there’s room to further develop the characters and deepen their personalities. For me, understanding the characters’ perspectives is essential, as it helps create a more immersive experience. Additionally, I’m struggling to fully grasp how the protagonist’s abilities work. It would be helpful to provide more clarity on this aspect, so readers can better understand how those abilities shape his journey and impact his development throughout the novel. Enhancing this would allow for a smoother, more engaging narrative!
author has a lot of potential just ended too early 😕 this is a potential masterpiece if he didn't end it earlier 😔
Hello author here! Thank you for taking your time to read my story. I'm happy to invite you all to the world of Micheal as he, his family and friends journey to find happy endings to their own stories instead of being cannonfodders in other people's stories. (And a shameless five star for myself.[img=Loving it])