bleach: the all powerful demon

LV 14

50ShadesOfAss

Please confirm something for me because I love this anime and novel but the fanfictions people make for it are always trash. Always make mc be In the shadow of Rimuru and always make him weaker than Rimuru . Always have the same plot , everything happens the same with just MC there so please confirm it. Already looks like I won’t enjoy because he’s just another follower of Rimuru

LV 10

MoonTree

I only read the first chapter and dropped it. There is too much mixture of powers, it will be a humorous fic where the mc is powerful, I do not need to go too far to find out, with only the first chapter you can see that there will be no drama, no romance, I am pretty sure there will be many lemons. The powers you have chosen have no synergy, beyond that they can be used, for example, you should have chosen, in addition yamato, the sword skill and technique sasaki kojiro (noble ghost) Tsubame Gaeshi, you basically asked for a lot of powers without synergy. Also, do you really want the kyubi? So that? what would be the point? Not to mention that there is no chakra in the spirit world, it cannot be used. I think I'm being unfair, it's probably a parody so it should be fine, your writing is readable, although it seems (though I'm only guided by the first chapter) the story is fast-paced.