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Becoming the Strongest in Black Clover
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A teenage boy died during an airplane crash. But because he is one of the special few, he gets another chance, in the world of Black Clover.
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This is a fanfic I came up with randomly while I was in the bathroom, so I don't know how far I can take this. I'm doing this purely for my entertainment. Just like my other fanfic, I'll release one chapter a week.
Also, this won't be a harem, there will be one love interest, and the MC won't get too powerful too quick, I like to take my time developing their powers.
I obviously don't own Black clover, nor the picture used. (If the creator wants me to change the picture, just let me know)
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I have read your MHA fanfiction and can say this is as good as that. I hope you will continue this fanfic, it is one of the better ones from just the first few chapters.
tbh it is good .. but it needs a lot more like interaction betwen the character ..and it needs a lot more Description of the scenery and like that and more of it if you can make ... and you need to put more into not making the mc a 1d character ..no he needs to see and intracnt with others and so
The quality of this story is a significant drop compare to the authors other story which is a shame. It rushes through everything, there's a bit of mistakes, and it doesn't flesh out interactions between the mc and other characters which is one of the few advantages of fan fics. My advice? Go back and rewrite from the start and take a slower pace or just drop entirely and wait until you're finished with your other novel and then focus on this one because even giving it 3 stars is being generous
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Chapter 25 and I am cringed out of sanity. 1. The reason he chose Black Clover is annoying at best. 2. The wishes were ... how can I put this, normally when people get frustrated they facepalm but the wishes will make one to take a tactical nuke in the face. 3. He wishes for no mother but when mother died he whines. 4. Before and after reincarnation and time skip his personality drastically changed to be one of 3rd class cn protagonist young master. 5. He never kills or catches enemy that is in canon. Reason to keep the og plot intact. He heals enemy but didn't heal his ally who is psych-locked. 6. Too arrogant and to full of himself. 7. I have no idea what writer wanted to achieve in chapter 25 was it a cringe fest or some weird comedy? But I can confidently say it falls face first and died of brain aneurysm.
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The book is decent, but I feel that it could benefit from additional details regarding the scenery. It would have been great if the main character had more opportunities to interact with their surroundings. Also, allow the main character to talk more to some of the people around him, not just two sentences and it’s over. Have a more engaging conversation time-to-time.
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I loved it don't drop it...................................................................................................................
Muito bom, mas acho que a magia dele tem potencial para ser mais versátil. Ele já é poderoso suficiente, mas não no nível capitão. Leiam, eu gostei
La magia de ferrofluido no llama la atención es un punto muy importante a tener en cuenta el fondo del mundo es correcto y lleva bien rimo pero la magia lo corta hay poco descripción de entrenamiento y se siente muy rápido sin dar el crecimiento de personaje adecuado
A really well written story so far! This did get a bit of hate on two things in the beginning, the first thing was how the MC made his wishes which was a bit weird. And the second part was that his power was Ferrofluid, a black oil like substance with magnetic characteristics. his power is a bit odd at first but if you can overlook that, this story seemm to take a really good shape at 5 chapters. You should try it out, and be a bit overlooking at the first chapter with the wishes, other than that everything else is really good!
A really good fanfiction for black clover First I thought the choices for affinity was bad but looks like it was not the Story is great very unique unlike those with system and stuffs but yeah I love this all I can say its:
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ferrofluid magic is good, just don't give him devil, give him sage mode with its help make ferrofluid orbs as truth seeking orbs it would be awesome,(it's just a suggestion, consider it if you like it)