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Autor: Commonnerfer

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An updated and partially rewritten version to be posted on Royal Road Reincarnated into the World of Remnant. Let’s see where this take our gender bent protagonist. What adventures will happen. Will the fall of beacon be prevented? Can Salem be stopped? Is traveling worlds possible where will they end up next.

I wanna admit now this is my second ever book. At the start, I wasn't that good at keeping track of things like time there are times when I meant to jump months and it seems like its the next day. There are times when I mean to time skip years and it was only months. The first 7 chapters are there and a mess I am sorry about that, its been over a year since I have written them and I still do not know how to fix them. Im really only keeping this book here because it is A End. It is gonna be my last fanfic when I finish it and I like to read it sometimes to see my own growth as a writer.

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Commonnerfer

I don’t think I have ever shamelessly rated my own book before. Wanted to give it a try. I don’t see what’s so special about it? Put a lot of work into this book with research and stuff. First try at an adventure/romance still not comfortable writing those R-18 chapters so it might take awhile before I’m willing to try that.

4yr
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Nick_Valentine

I like this penny girl? What model synth is she? Overall great story, a bit yuri but as long as it’s not Yaoi I can live. Can’t wait for more.

4yr
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NineTailsOfTheVoid

Things are going fast, all I know is that the MC was once a dead man, now he is a Saiyan woman who falls into a world that I know nothing about, he asks the first person he knows to teach him how to use his scythe, and now they compare it to '' Ruby '' in almost everything

4yr
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WolfSpatial

This was such a good book... until it became a harem. I cant stand harems, and I dont understand everyone elses obsession with them either. Anyway, if you’re into harems, this book is for you, but if you dont hate yourself, read something else.

4yr
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Shaska

I can't get past chapter 2, it's all very confusing, the author doesn't explain anything or why he reincarnated or where he was, or even who the people from the first chapter were ...

3yr
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Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work sensei !😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

4yr
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PhantomOfNyx

I'm going a neutral review. I didn't last very long in the story for several reasons. I understand that this is fanfiction and I'm not far enough to judge the raw writing material however it seems to be updated regylarly but the series starts out from the get go with the requirement of you having knowledge of the following series dragonball z and all it includes fallout the fallout game universe and the games mechanics Ruby another successfull anime i personally haven't watched and what it includes. I suspect there is a few i might have missed but without prior knowledge of the following series will you as a reader be hopelessly lost in regards to what is going on, as it is not explained but is assumed you already know everything that is required to be known. I wish the author best of luck with the series and I will likely try to give it another shot if I ever get around to watching ruwby and try to update my review around it. so the tldr from my perspective do I recommend you skip this or seek out all the prior series and attain the knowledge required to enjoy it before you engage with this novel. if you do have the prior series under your belt do I think it is worth giving a shot.

4yr
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Eternal_Ouroboros

The writing quality for this novel and fan-fiction is absolutely amazing, way above the majority of the content of this site. It's a refreshing thing, when you're finally able to read a work that makes sense and that's actually well paced. I enjoyed reading every chapter for sure. The stability of updates so far is really good, impressively so. With a great many chapters each week, so you never have to wait long for cliffhangers. Though those are few and far in between. The story development is very well done. Although it may not seem like saying much as it does indeed follow the canon, that's only as a guideline, much like a D&D player's handbook XD. With the introduction of all the different techs from modern earth and Marvel's Stark Industries, the plot development takes many surprisingly entertaining turns. Even the minor changes here and there, that don't seem much by themselves, are meaningful in the end when combined together. I love the way things have turned out to be with the pip-boy and her being a Sayan, and to be totally honest, I was quite put off at first with the gender-bending, but through theses few dozens of chapters, it wasn't weird to read nor was it awkward or forced. All in all, good job! The character design, the only reason I'm not giving it a full 5 star is because the original charas from RWBY didn't exactly feel like the ones I knew. Which, I know, doesn't sound very intelligent considering this is a fan-fiction, but as a reader, this is what I selfishly look for in most fan-fics. That being said, I didn't mean to say the charas were a total miss, not in the least. They have redeeming points for sure and it still makes up for an action packed novel to follow. The world building, I mean there isn't that much to say about it. The only times you'd get actual world building was for plot developments in fight scenes because they were needed for the environment. Needless to say, the world building is already done, with the setting of the story being in the world of Remnant. However, the small clips of world building from the fight scenes were well done. I cannot stress how much this is my favorite RWBY fan fiction. And as a RWBY fan, I love seeing it get the justice it deserves in the shape of this novel. Well written, good update schedule, follows canon plot with original twists. Plus it has Yuri. What more could you ask for? **: Author-san, do you have a fetish for gender-bending? First was MC, now it's Oscar?? Will there be more? :3

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4yr
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lnsomniac_

Why does this have a Harry Potter tag???ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

2yr
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Grafian
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I remember long, long ago (read; this morning) when I started reading this story I was thinking about dropping it. The first... four or so(?) chapters were rough and tough to get into, but man I'm at 122 now and I feel like a wise oji-san when looking back at my younger and more foolish self for ever even considering dropping this amazing fic!

4yr
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Astral464

I can't read past chapter 7 it's so hard to read after the 1 year time skip where the MC has a lot of references to others thing eg stark industry. Like why did we even see here start to plot this before the time skip why are we only hearing of it now. Personal I'm not going to read it any more because it jumps to open subject to another to much but I do recommend reading. I'll try to read to ch 10 and will change my review of it gets better. 👍

4yr
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darkmoncns

I think this story is really frantic, it had progressed at a good pass and uploaded really often, it went through plausible reactions in the world of remnet to the insertion of this character to the story. Tho, the main character is indeed blue ruby, with a fair reason I guess, but still, blue ruby with a tail is a complete description of her design.

4yr
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Frog_God_Mentor

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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2yr
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AzurLaneFan

Some one unjustly gave you two stars so im doing this to fix it. the book is over 300 chapters dont write a review becsuse you can be bothered to read past chalter 2

3yr
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HiatusAuthorEuclid

Dear Author, What the ****, how did you make this soo good! I love your story and have been rereading it for the past 3 days. I wish I could have some of your writing skills as I am making a story about RWBY aswell. Thank you for making this story!! Sincerely from a Newbie Author EuChan

4yr
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Sora_Nai

I was a bit confused in the first 2-3 chapters not really understanding what was going on, but now I've come to really enjoy this work. The main RWBY characters are portrayed accurately in ways that would make sense given their canon character types. The implentation of the mc into the RWBY-verse was also developed very well and feels natural. I have to say that I'm not a huge fan of yuri, but the author made it work in a way that doesn't at all seem forced. 5/5 I'm looking forward to how the story will develop from now on!

4yr
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Jeasus_Cwist

it's great. I love the world of RWBY and most writers of RWBY fanfics update rarely or drop it. Its a great and rare occasions to find a RWBY fanfic. So please please keep updating..

4yr
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Esiyx
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Nice book. Pls update moreee! And also, YURI!!!!!!!!! Thank you! ——————————————————— ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————-

4yr
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Darcsule

One of the first books I read on here and one I find myself coming back to reread. I also enjoy the author’s other works.

9mth
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AliciaMei

is this story just on pause or has the author dropped the story completely as need to know what is gonna happen next

1yr
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