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"I love you and I will be there for you always and forever. I promise..."
When he whispered those words in her ear she felt a shock wave travel through her entire body. Maayi San looked intensely into his eyes. She couldn't believe what she just heard. They both stopped dancing. They looked into each other's eyes. His eyes were repeating those words again and again to her. Maayi was really shocked so no words left her mouth.
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I love the title of this, its soo captivating. I love how the flow is going. The writer has done amazingly. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for whats next.
The world-building, scene, and convention are amazing, the synopsis drew me into the book... the writing style, description of mood, plots and setting was cool ... a good read
I wasn't really feeling their love but I'll just give it time. Sharing my thought honestly I think you need to work on capturing people's heart with a strong feeling by letting all your emotions be in the character your portraying, I need to feel it.
sometimes story gets relatable to someone i know. character design, writing quality . everything is fine .story is enjoyable and waiting for next chapter