Alistar Bumblebee

LV 4

amaturewriter

I am not staying to always do it, but if u can maybe atleast once a week. dont want u to burn out. But you know, this is dope. amazingly well written long chps are always appreciated. I have barely any knowledge regarding this world so if u can any basic info would be appreciated. The MC who isnt a hero is nice. A good MC is fine but heros arent interesting, this current MC is better. Maybe a bit ruthless and selfish? not good or evil, just neutral? He is also smart, dope.It would be nice to see him use modern world sciences and fictional knowledge from anime and shit for his advantage to create spells , etc. The MC so far being secretive and smart is nice,. more of it would be cool. I would ask that MC isnt a show off retard or some heroic MC that saves people for no reason, a secretive planner would be nice. Any relationships just build. if romance dont make lover useless sluts, etc. Could create a powerlvl system or something? Anyway love u shit, GL. **: pls dont assume that I am telling u what to do, etc. they were just requests

LV 4

Uncle_Sheogorath

Great story I like it!! My advice is to expand your synopsis as I wasn't even sure what fanfic it was before reading the first chapter. Some people like to know what they are getting into before reading. May attract more readers. Moreover, I hope mc doesn't become some 'hero' without any ambition as that would be boring. Perhaps chaotic neutral in terms of morality(google it if you're not sure)? Mc being ruthless ambitions would be best in my opinion, with his strong desire to learn magic. However, learning magic for the sake of magic may be boring so I hope he uses it for his ambitions. Anyway, all of these are just my suggestions.

LV 4

ClearSkySage

One of the best pieces of work I've read in my entire life, I simply loved the take on Warcraftverse magic, and the subtle clues of other worlds, simply magnific. I totally recommend this piece fo art for anyone who loves a good old fantasy book. And I feel like I've ascended somewhat after reading chapter 10.

LV 6

InHisName

Average story. Has its strengths, and weaknesses. The strength is definitely the attention the author pays to detail, painting what's quite frankly an immersive, realistic fantasy world! Now...even then a hiccup. The author completely and utterly fails in using appropriate pronouns; not only is gender confused all over the place, but gender is attributed to inanimate objects throughout the story. It's a huge immersion breaker! Now for the story's greatest weakness. The protagonist. Alistar (MC) has about as much personality as dried paint. He doesn't express any emotions. He never conveys his thoughts. Never takes the initiative think about anything (apart from magical theory) in-depth. All of MC's thinking so far has been extremely superficial. Just know, everyone the MC meets and interacts with will exploit him in one way or another, and the MC is just too weak, too pathetic to do anything about it.

LV 4

Amir_Blumenfeld

Awesome novel. Would recommend.

LV 13

Tonyorobsky

I like the story, but it’s frustrating sometimes. Writing quality could be better. Like not mixing he/she his/her. Some sentences are also weird, the result of a literal translation without care for grammar or appropriate vocabulary. The world background is good, if a little too focused on magic. The protagonist is a little bland. He becomes completely obsessed with magic, so much he doesn’t even have a social life. He spent a whole year without seeing his father, even though they live in the same city!!! Heck, even before that, his interactions with his father were bland, lacking the feelings of family. Now the biggest problem in my opinion: The protagonist is a transmigrated guy... And that important point is wasted. I don’t see much difference between him and a native OC who had some prophetic dreams about the future (alternative to warcraft game knowledge). All important information is forgotten or ignored. The only thing from his former world that he used is jam. Of all the things available to a guy from our world he could use. JAM!!! Another offender is that the mages of Darlaran felt the spacial perturbations of his transmigration, and quickly had someone locate it and check on him. Yet they didn’t have the same reaction for the opening of the Dark Portal. (as if the arrival of an ordinary soul in a remote village would make such big waves in space and magic that they should notice it) It was a cheap way to put the attention of big guys on him.

LV 5

O_Corvo

Me, the Great Crow, The CocaCol, that flew from FanFictionet to Spacebattles, from AO3 to Wattpad (kidding, I didn't travel in these murky waters) I declare this as the best FanFic WOW. and only my opinion matters because I am the Great Crow.

LV 4

Nitrox2

Excellent warcraft Fan Fiction. It is a pleasure to read this novel even if the authot don't know the grammatical difference between "she/he" and "It" (You will be confused more than one time when you will see "she" speaking of magic, alliance etc ...) Good work.

LV 12

Lothlorien

This is excellent, and the chapters are very long, which of course is a good thing! ....................................................................

LV 1

Antonia_Mitter

A wonderful Story! Would love to read more! Sadly there doesn't seem to be more updates for more than 3 months. Hopefully the author will get more inspiration soon. A new character with a storyline bevore WoW that isn't directly overpowered makes for a good and interesting read,

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LV 5

Ballad

Amazing Read I highly recommend this if your a fan of World of Warcraft, it's so well written even the Minor changes to the story and so on honestly I truly hope this story gets more support and author keeps writing I spent my entire time reading this with a small smile on my face didn't even skim once so you know it's good, also I love He's Relationship and Friendship with the Windrunner sisters.

LV 4

Tselmeg

Just wanted to tell you I have read this without signing in on my Phone. But from now on i will give you every of my power stones. I wish you good luck. Please dont drop this.

LV 12

Kilian

A great weak to strong (World of) Warcraft story. The protagonist is not OP or omniscient and there is a great amount of attention to character development.

LV 2

Wind0fWorldiness

Best warcraft fan fiction on this site no doubt, good time. Author put a lot of efforts in researching lore, for witch I am very thankful. Can't wait for another chapter!

LV 13

Bobtob

it's a wow fan fic about a mage what else can one ask for. you must read it and review and beg the author for more. I need more people to read this so the author will release more.

LV 1

Daoist552822

https://ficbook.net/authors/695351 If you know Russian and don't care about canon and logic. He has good ideas, but... yes, the reason is in the previous sentence