A story of multiverse travels.

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Photosphere

*Writing Quality: The writing has several typos per paragraph in the beginning, the advancement is noteworthy in later chapters but it is still quite decent compared to some other works out there, it has the correct distributions of words per paragraph, dialogues are also placed correctly in later chapters, I give three stars mostly because sometimes you're lacking pronouns or having typos that can switch the entire meaning of a sentence. *Stability of Updates: Apparently, it is a steady schedule so 5 stars. *Story Development: The story although generic in my view, develops sweetly at a moderate pace, MC becomes OP too soon, but anyway, that's technically a trend in fanfics at this stage which I won't judge, things are developing at their own pace and cannon has few changes to it, 5 stars. *Character Design: This is where I believe this novel excels, the dialogues are alive, characters have gimmicks and the interactions feel real, there is love and friendship well portrayed here, 5 stars. *World Background: There are close to no scenery descriptions, like, I take it most readers will know how danmachi's set is, but a description of the scenery, weather conditions, the sun etc... would liven up the most precious dialogues and give an ample description, in any case, I'll give three stars simply because as fanfic, this subject is not as required as in an original novel. I'm personally enjoying the development of the romance with Hephaestus and perhaps Freya in the future, overall it is a nice read.

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chuvi

I just hope this story doesn't stop in the middle and for the story it was top notch fighting author!!!

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Cabelinho

very interesting stories the plot is amazing so far, I'm really enjoying the personality of the protagonist, Hephaestus is being the best heroine so far the author knows how to write

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_Pochitalover_

So far, it's an entertaining story with the potential to be the best if you play well with the world, its ecosystem, and the characters. I feel like the system is a bit confusing when it comes to skill levels, but it's nothing to write home about. Hephaestus as a love interest will never be bad or negative for a danmachi story, if it's a harem out of obligation, Haruhime should be there, with some whipping and slapping here and there, Freya, Mikoto wouldn't be bad either, the pacing of the story though it's quick, it doesn't destroy your mind to the point where you can't keep up and my only real complaint is that every woman the protagonist has ever met has sexual desires for him or craves his D which isn't very good because early or early it can be a mini kirito or some aberration of his style, I'm more of those who like a quick romance, but not at the speed of light, it's also not very nice to make random women fall in love at first sight with the protagonist just to that I stay as the man with the biggest D in the place, I support the author in this successful start and I reserve the 5 stars for the future.

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Carlos_Balbizan

it was very good until the most recent arc... it's almost as if the author threw the whole story into the fan, he gave some tips and such of what was going to happen, but not that the execution would be so bad and sudden. It's a good story, but I recommend you stop reading around chapter 62 which is where it all goes down the drain (I think the amount of times I complained about this arc leads to my frustration)

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Wowcraft

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leyrin

a historia é bom tem um bom desenvolvimento , as vezes sinto que falta detalhamento no que está acontecendo e que os capítulos acabam muito rápido. mas no geral a fanfic é muito boa e eu recomendo.[img=recomendar]

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WALEED

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Spencer_Baskin

Excellent book I can't wait to see it's conclusion which I hope is not soon. __________________________________________________________________

"Blue sky is in the distance. It feels so close. Yet, I cannot grab it even if I reach out with my hands. I looked up at the stars before. The stars that I cannot reach and the wishes that will not be granted. There is nothing we have been able to leave behind for each other. Therefore, traces and memories will disappear someday. But still... Even if it will not reach her, there should be something that will remain in our hearts. There is nothing that remains in our hands, but we lived the same time and looked up at the same things. If I can remember that. I can believe that we can be together even if we are far apart." - Emiya Shirou

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DaoistKLskQX

I love the story but the update stability is not that good, please we need more chapter author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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LEGACI_fortnite

thank for hard work but WE NEED MORE MORE MORE CHAPTER.I told that to WRITT MORE MORE OR I will end you AND take your soul to read the last of this fantastique story are you heard me . sorry about language and continue your hard work.

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ReaperE

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WETARDZ_R_US

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ShadowMonarch185

I am the owner of this world Gold is my body and wine is my blood I have treasured over a thousand blades Unknown to humility, nor known to poorness Have withstood mongrels to create my kingdom Yet this heart will never keep any more friends So as I boast, Unlimited Mongrel Works

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AStrAl_Soul

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Ster_Bern

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Atom_Guy

5 Stars for Red haired pirate goddess. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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kobeblackmamba

I just hope this story doesn't stop in........ .......................................... the middle and for the story it was top notch fighting author!!!.................. ............................