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Capítulo 1: Death and Wishes

(Mc's pov)

Well hello there... I am Shiv I am a 22 yr old Indian antisocial otaku or was now I am dead now I am just a soul ... Well I was crossing the road when I heard a loud "beep" and a "honk".... I saw a car and a truck coming towards me the car was trying to overtake the truck it was at that moment. I was sure I was going to die but the problem was how...

Ran over by a car or driven on by truck "sama" and being the being of high intellect I am I chose to die by truck sama's hands (not literally though ;) )

So I sidestepped in front of the truck and spread my hands wide apart just like Tony Stark proclaiming to be Iron man I opened my both hands to accept death by glorious truck sama's hand...

(3rd pov)

While shiv was going through his internal monologue of how he died by a truck a man with long white hair and equally long white beard was watching our little ball of light "The MC" in his soul form

'Cough.... Cough' The old man fake coughed to bring attention to himself

'Who are you....? ' Asked the little ball of light

'I am ROB and I am here to grant you 2 wishes and a reincarnation in a world of your choosing' Said the old man with a face that was screaming worship me mortal....

'Why..... What did I do to deserve this I basically did nothing in my past life not that I regret it though.... '

Asked the shiny little ball of light

'Well you yourself answered your question its because you did nothing.... You see you were born with two special gifts or curse you say... You were born with " Evil unclucky sucker physique"And a "Fateless soul" Whatever you did for the good of the world will come to bite back the world and the Gods in it by a million times more disastrous ways... And your fateless soul ensures those who harm you will harmed by the universe itself and since you are fatless there is no limit to your potential hence you were a ticking time bomb and now since you died the special physique is gone now you are just a fateless soul who will be wandering in the void until the voids corruption melts your soul and it fades away... Since you didn't cause the destruction of the world and potentially the universe you deserve a gift for saving the world and the universe itself'

'So child ask away your wishes.... '

The little soul was shocked by the Revelation that how he was a ticking time bomb then he woke up from his stupor

'I would like to ask for a body with Tenseigan with chakra capacity of of jubi along with knowledge of all jutsu in naruto world with their affinities' asked the shameless little soul with a straight face

(Damn you that's four wishes) thought the old man and his lips twitched at the shamelessness of the soul...

'Fine but the second wished will be random' said the old man and without waiting for the soul's conformation the old man spinned a gacha that stopped at devil fruit section more accurately at the "goro goro no mi" Section

'Whaaaat... 'The little soul was struck with lightning just by hearing the condition from the old man and brought out by the ding of gacha stopping which stopped at the "goro goro no mi" Section....

'Noooooo.... Nooooooo.... My multiverse travel ability..... 'The young man cried and glared hatefully at the old man who was whistling slightly facing away from the young man....

After few minutes the young soul calmed down...

'At least erase the sea weakness of the fruit' asked the young man in a pleading voice...

'DEAL' said the old man said jovially to which young mans lips twitched on how he was conned

(Shameless,Shameless to the extreme) thought the young man

As for my world I want to go to the "Second coming of gluttony" world with the face of "Sung jin woo" and in a rich family said the young soul with with a innocent face which looked pure distant from any taint of the world....

The old man looked at the young man with twitching lips since the young man made five wishes for one....

'Very well' said the old man

Just then a portal appeared and the young soul was sucked into the portal....

' phew' the old man wiped his sweat on how he avoided a time bomb and then chuckled on the fact that he has a story on how he dealt with a boy with Fateless soul and evil unlucky sucker physique for his grandchildren...


PENSAMENTOS DOS CRIADORES
mythoscribe mythoscribe

Well first of all i am a newbie I am just writing this to get an idea on how to write I have two ideas both are muliversal fanfics one is carnage in mha other one is a hero in tdg for the first volumes... I am just experiencing how to write and find my faults so that these two fanfics would be good enough since I put alot of idea in the tdg one.... Also I noticed not many people have tscog fanfics probably due to the high standard the story sets and not many people have read the novel it's been only a year for the manhua too...lets see how far can I take this since the story has all the tropes to be dropped early newbie author mc is already strongest in that world and all it can only be extended by slice of life and plot extension of the actual story..

Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know.

Thank you

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