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The omnitrix a level 20 device latches onto the wrist of an unexpecting 13 year old dark skinned male from Middleton. From that point onwards, The life that the 13 year old boy from Middleton once knew has been turned upside down with his newfound responsibility as the holder of the Omnimatrix. He now has to take action against foes not even himself would be able to take down even with the Omnimatrix part of his arsenal, luckily he has family and friends to stand by his side as he strives through this difficult path of a hero.
(Alien designs are in the comment section by the word labelled design)
Old aliens, new aliens, old faces, new faces and new foes this is the Ben 10 story of; Cameron Lenardo.
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First season review. I love it. It is not everyday you find a Ben10 book that isn't about Ben and actually has a non OP main. I love the other, but I love this one a lot. The fact the writer is working with a highschool scenario and is somehow finding ways to make everything interesting is great. The new aliens love them, the story is not top tier, but I enjoyed it, the introduction of old aliens with new names, loved it. A few stuff regarding the Ben10 lore are still kinda wrong, but it's not a big effect.
I’m a HUGE fan. Especially a fan of the custom aliens and names of the returning aliens. It’s a nice touch that the aliens don’t immediately get their names and the mc has to think. I also like the way the Mc and his friends are written. They feel like actual teenagers who do stupid things and have fun. Really glad that there is no reincarnation and that the mc isnt a god that knows what to do. I hope the author continues this fic for a while. I love it.
Love the book man. Overall amazing obviously has its faults like every book, but I like it. I especially like how the volumes so far were all different in the way that they put the main character in different scenarios that made the story feel new. For example; The first volume was about the middle school life and the second was about a roadtrip and the third was about the highschool life. Loved it.
The synopsis is already wrong calling the Omnitrix a bioweapon when it's not a weapon in the first place. A weapon is a tool that was designed to cause harm to its victim anyone with a brain and who has watched the shows can tell that the Omnitrix does not fall into this category. Just by this, I'm already scared to read this story as I'm a huge Ben 10 fan.
Actually the omnitrix can Alter DNA Of Anyone or living thing it can turn a frog into a superman (dc) or a thanos no gauntlet (marvel) Ants into Frost giants all you need to do is have the species you want it to turn into in the data base (over 1million in their and it can scan more) and you can even do half transformations also btw Goku Slaps superman Satamana Claps Goku in a true death match (all out first swing otherwise Goku more than likely wins) and Ben Claps all 3 together and no I'm not talking kiddey Ben I'm talking max Ben