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Capítulo 10: Why Im not suprised

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And it pisses me off too and maybe even little scaring me but it still FEELS good for all the time before I felt apathy no matter how much I tried to mask it !!! YES, this IS it THIS FEELING of Mystery is nice!!!!

GAHAHAHAHAHA

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Authors NOTE:

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To clarify few things Power of Soul-mind is passive power what is maxed so it cant be trained more it gives these benefits:

1. His mind is immune to all outside and inside interference to clarify he is immune to mind corruption, mind control, mind invasion(mind-reading cant be done to him), and all similar powers that can negatively affect his mind...

2. His soul is bound to his mind so all benefits listed up are applying to his soul,

3. If his body is destroyed his Soul will come to where he has the mind in that case in one of his backups bodies what he created in case of destruction of his current body, as such there can by just 1x Commander Nisiris all other bodies are just computers until his soul will not merge with them

4. His soul can't be erased or absorbed and any soul or mind based attack doesn't work on him as he is Absolutely Immune to it...

Now that we have clarified Soul-mind powers lets go clarify Space-time power and why he is not training it yet:

1. He knows that once he starts train Space or time powers he would send fluctuation with what other users of similar power would be able to feel... as such he start training these 2 powers when he gains or gets knowledge or artifact with what he can mask or stop or erase any kind of function be training... as right now he would become like Light Beacon in darkness and give away his position to everybody who knows how to find him...

2. so right now all Space-time power work is like a passive radar for every Space-time related event he cants actively using it but he can feel other people who use it...

Now let's Enjoy another chapter!

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General POV:

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In the long gray hallway illuminated by soft blue light, you can hear footsteps by metal hitting metal we can see Nisiris walking in a calm manner until he stops and turns to one side of the wall and give command...

Nisiris: Open

and just like that the supposed wall open hidden door and give us sigh of a woman in a blood-red colored dress with flames, with Nigh black hair and Amber eyes what seems to glow in the darkness

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Cinder POV:

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Such failure... I cant come before Mistress like this even with maidens power she wouldn't forgive me for failing in destroying Vale...

I was soo close to finishing the plan.. the PLAN what I was making entire year was almost done even all the problems I was able to solve them and continue and now? just before my plan come to fruition another faction come from hiding... as if I believe such lie like world traveler.. they must be some hidden kingdom I don't know how they hide from Mistress sigh but she will not be happy no I must proceed with caution.

Not just that gigantic ship and these different flying vehicles but the soldiers... I'm maiden and even if I'm not one long time I'm very good at using maidens powers so how some soldier grunts were able to ignore my attacks with just shields that weren't giving any magic signals...

No there is even more but I just can't pinpoint it... their perfect cooperation and discipline even once they did not break the circle around my and giving me chance to flee not that I would be able to run I'm not delusional to believe that the ship in the skies didn't have weapons pointed at me. No, after I did see how effortlessly they eradicate every Grimm and with Elder Dragon Grimm what was shot down just like the rest... Soo much For strongest grim... my chances on fleeting were shot to zero...

and now I waiting there a few hours in this darkness with any way out or any spar in the walls... it's just like this room doesn't have doors with, they bring me there...

Hm oh, it seems I have a visitor...

Nisiris: OPEN

Cinder: Oh the Commander himself granted my audience such honor

his entire body is of metal is he like that PENNY girl or is it just ruse?

Nisiris: Such beautiful girl yet such poisonous mouth really you giving phrase Rose with Thorns good example

Cinder: You can say the difference between what's beautiful and what's not? arent you made of metal because all I see is a cold impression what you giving and that's isn't a good first example...

let's see how you react to different things...

Nisiris:(get being in the human body I think i wouldn't be able to control myself...I'm glad I don't have hormones in my otherwise this would go badly...for her... just you wait I'm sure I can crack that smirk of yours...) Haah really Cinder? really? trying to antagonizing me? don't you think that's a bad idea when I have now, say about your life and death?

Cinder: what can you say a woman can dream... now, why have you come because we both know if you didn't want something from my you wouldn't hold me and come here myself and rather just send some grunt at me... so what do you wish Commander?

Let's see if can get outside of there...

Nisiris: Haah you know what ok... you are lucky that I like bichess... I don't mean it as an insult rather we both know you are one, and I have soft spot for them meaning for you so as long as you know your place when it comes to me! but you are right I want something and that's you and not in the way you think not at least until the time I have human body no. I want you to work for me and as to saving time I prepared this video for you with all information about what you need to know about me and what I will want from you so look at it and after I come back you can tell me your response...

Hooo he is rather an idiot or arrogant... or he knows what I want hmmm let's get to look what plan he has for me in his head...

The video starts playing and he closed the door...

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Nisiris POV:

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Heh, she is hot and like really hot in the meaning of her temperament but I don't mind her being disrespectful to me after all if everyone just prostrating to my it would become a pain in the ass too quickly... no, I don't want to broke her or hurt her no no no...

I want for her to come to respect me and love me as a leader or man or whatever she comes with from herself without my doing...

I want to conquer her naturally for just in that way it would give me the best feeling..!!

well for time being she is done with now I would speak with Torchwick and Neo at the same time... I Hmm soo much fun this is !!!!

and here we are

Nisiris: OPEN

Nisiris: Hello Batman and Robin

Tortchwick: what?

Neo:....

Nisiris: oh wrong time sorry sorry let's start again shall we? you see Roman I can call you Roman right? Splendid you see I'm in dilemma what I will do with you.. personally I like you guys really! you are Thief with great style but the problem is you are Thief and I as great example citizen who following laws cant help you no matter how much I want you to understand right?

Neo:..../looking at my like idiot/...

Roman: Example? Citizen? Following law? really you would come at my with these nonsense metal guy? but for pressing my style thanks lot it's hard these days find someone to praise great thief like me.

Neo:...../looking at both of as like idiots/.....

Roman/Nisiris: pfffff hahahahahahaha

Nisiris: ok ok now I know you are fun to have so what do you say don't you want to work for me? I can make sure you get best items you can get... you will not rot in prison and no need to fear anybody and I myself will not make you do a lot of things rather you would just have to follow some rules and maybe if you work for my I can make sure that Cute girl get her voice back...

Neo:...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

Roman: REALLY?! you can heal her ?!

Nisiris: (Hoo he has a stronger reaction than I thought) Yes and Yes I can so what do you say?

Roman: As long as you heal her I don't mind working for you... if you tell me what work you want from us...

Neo:..../Neo is looking at Roman with teary eyes/...

Nisiris: oh don't worry I don't want you doing something what you cant do... no, what I want is from you ruling underground society in mine steed and follow rules like...

1. any drugs market

2. any Slave market

3. any Innocent Murder

4. any Ra.pe

5. I want to know about everything that is happening in a dark society

6. any under working government

Nisiris: and that's all, for now, it can change in future but that is the gist of what I would want from you so do we have a deal? I will protect you from anybody if you will find yourself in a tight spot...

Roman: that's all? great I would myself did more than half of it after all you cant destroy your gold eggs and us master thief myself I look on long term benefits and not short... It just pity I find myself under that firebich thumb...

Nisiris:(heh wonder what happens if he finds Cinder would maybe be his colleague) Oh that's splendid! there you have a video with everything you need to know about me and my city and powers and I will let guards lead you to better rooms...

Nisiris: oh before I forget what relationship between you two?

Roman: Hm? oh, you can say she is like Daughter to my... what is with that look you give me? I maybe don't look at that but I have 39 years and she is just 18 years old... I adopt her when I find her living on the streets... it was the best decision in my life...

Neo:.../blushing/...( i love you too dad)...

Nisiris: huh did not think that... no matter I will give you time to absorb all information for I'm sure you would be surprised...

Roman: you know for a supposed cold Tinman you are really nice one wonder how a man of iron is better than some humans...

Nisiris: haha thanks for compliment Roman and take care we will see each other at dinner time with probably we will have more of your new colleagues...

As is walk outside and giving droids mental note to lead Roman and Neo to suites for V.I.P visitors I mule about what I find and I will du...

Now I have still time for some but I really don't have any desire to speak with mad bull Adam or lackeys like Emerald or Mercury what were cachet and are now in prison there... no, let's wait on cinder decision and then I will go and speak with Vale council...

And then I will meet team RWBY for I wonder what my emotions would be when I will be close to Ruby... hm I can't wait...


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