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Escreva uma avaliaçãoI understand, some smart MCs try to exploit flexible powers with their own intelligence and imagination. why don't you just give him the visionary from bleach, this shit would be more interesting than trying to make your own power system.
Just loved the fanfic from the moment I started reading it. Truly a work of art ring able to blend emotions into it in such a way the readers can understand and feel what the character of going through. Kudos and I hope you keep writing.
I dont get why this fic has such a high rating, its just a word for word retelling of the original books with just a few mentions of mc thrown in every other sentence. It follows every other trope pjo fics has, murdered dead mother, op powers but not even using it. Dialogue also feels stiff and artificial at times although no grammar or spelling mistakes ive seen.
I read up to chapter 15 and I must say it had a lot of potential until he started with SID syndrome and wanted to be someone just a little above average, since he is quite op and this led to Sally's forced death, not to mention him, despite having a photographic memory, he apparently has selective memory based on the plot for anything about Percy Jackson and those who don't like the Chinese writing style, I'm sorry, but despite not being Chinese, it seems very Chinese.
Revelar SpoilerSpectacular, simply spectacular, this book, the author and writer of this book is simply spectacular, I really like this story, how it hooks you in the way in which simple chapters make you feel emotions from happiness, joy, love to sadness, anger, anxiety. It is simply spectacular, I hope you continue with this story, you have the talent to be an excellent writer.
I really like your novel, please don't drop it. You have good grammar, the chapters are long, the characters are well developed, the MC doesn't make you cringe, and a lot of other things make your novel one of the best I've read on this website.
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This story was one of the most fun i've read in a long time. I liked how he's an actual hero that's op and yet has too many fatal flaws, one being selflessness, another being love, and another his humanity. It's amazing because I was like damn, he's in pain and there was even more pain but it was all worth it. We saw him as untouchable and you broke him, as an author should. I can't wait to see his development. You ended on quite a cliffhanger. The updates are great. The world is growing. You write pretty well and you seem to know a lot about the world. It shows in your work. Please just don't make him a shirou emiya or a peter parker. I hope that when you finish this story, however long that may be, that he is happy. Though, if that isn't your intention then forget about what I just said. This is an amazing story and I can't wait for more from you. P.s. The mom shit after arty was a stroke of evil genius. You destroyed his invincibility. Can't wait to see what he'll do now and good luck.
Revelar SpoilerThe story progresses really good. Not too slow neither too fast. It's really well written except for writing how beautiful he is like every chapter😂. But anyway that's all I can think of I don't like. It's also getting uploaded very often. The plot Twist at the end of vol. 1 was also really great, although a bit sad. Please keep up the great work
An incredible experience! This story kept me hooked from beginning to end. The plot is engaging, the characters are memorable, and the writing is simply impeccable. The author managed to create a rich and detailed world, making me feel like I was experiencing every moment with the characters. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an exciting and unforgettable read. Highlights: * Plot: Original and addictive. * Characters: Complex and well-developed. * Style: Fluid and engaging. * World: Rich and well-constructed.
The author's story kept me hooked from start to finish! The way he developed the characters and the plot was simply incredible. Each page was a new surprise, making me want to know more. I recommend it with my eyes closed!
Very good, the best Percy Jackson story I've ever read! Despite having some mistakes and some problems, if you ignore them, it's a very immersive and exciting story, the author knew how to describe the characters' emotions very well. But some readers may find this a bit bad because they want something perfect in their retarded conception!
Although it has some mistakes and is a so-so translation, this story is very good! There is a feeling in the characters that makes us feel immersive. I loved it!
Revelar SpoilerApós ler a história posso concluir, essa é uma das melhores história de Percy Jackson que eu já li, o começo pode ser meio estranho para quem já leu o livro pois parece que os diálogos são todos repetidos, mais depois a história fica muito boa, principalmente com os problemas do protagonista com seus sentimentos por Ártemis, recomendo muito a ler essa história, e se Ártemis for a única protagonista feminina seria ainda melhor.
Revelar SpoilerThis is a very fun power fantasy, would recommend to anyone who is bored or who is just starting to read fanfics
Não cheguei ler ainda, então depois volto para dar uma avaliação, mais quem será o par romântico? 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
This story is pretty interesting and the main character is cool. But I just don’t like how much stronger he is than everyone else. By chapter 25 the author says that he destroy the gods with a slap of his hand. That just really gets rid of any intrigue and tension with the story as you know that the MC is just so far above it all. I just wish that the mic developed slower. A good example of power progression in the Percy Jackson universe would be the Prince of the Underworld story by shadowmonarch he also has a character stronger than the others in the story but it feels believable and his goal makes it fine.
This is like the second best Percy Jackson fanfic I ever read keep up the good work and don’t drop the story please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Very good story. I like the way the story is told and the main character is one of the few MC that doesn't act like a douchebag or an idiot. Anxious to see how the author will develop the other characters and their relationship with one another.
Very good, the best Percy Jackson story I've ever read! Despite having some mistakes and some problems, if you ignore them, it's a very immersive and exciting story, the author knew how to describe the characters' emotions very well. But some readers may find this a bit bad because they want something perfect in their retarded conception!
The story is one of the better Percy Jackson fanfics. However, I don't like how there isn't any growth with other characters. Having the mc doing all the fighting gets old real quick.
An incredible experience! This story kept me hooked from beginning to end. The plot is engaging, the characters are memorable, and the writing is simply impeccable. The author managed to create a rich and detailed world, making me feel like I was experiencing every moment with the characters. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an exciting and unforgettable read. Highlights: * Plot: Original and addictive. * Characters: Complex and well-developed. * Style: Fluid and engaging. * World: Rich and well-constructed.
The story is very good and very well written, Ikki's development is what I'm most looking forward to here.
overall great quality, love it just hope power scaling is clear in the future cuz it seems like its heading to a cultivation powers stuff so yeah
Although it has some mistakes and is a so-so translation, this story is very good! There is a feeling in the characters that makes us feel immersive. I loved it!
self-made power level concept, MC is just lucky trash who has too smooth a life, he puts limits on his own freedom by letting himself be tied to Percy. the development of your power level is not bad, but giving the concept of energy to a world that is more familiar with abilities more like muscle strength that cannot be judged except by its impact is annoying. I mean it's like you're providing standard calculations and complicated mechanisms involving concepts that aren't explained clearly in the Origins work through exploiting loopholes in the writing, it's like you're giving the concept of mana calculations in the Black Clover anime just to provide a system for the OC, very forced.
I understand, some smart MCs try to exploit flexible powers with their own intelligence and imagination. why don't you just give him the visionary from bleach, this shit would be more interesting than trying to make your own power system.
Just loved the fanfic from the moment I started reading it. Truly a work of art ring able to blend emotions into it in such a way the readers can understand and feel what the character of going through. Kudos and I hope you keep writing.
I dont get why this fic has such a high rating, its just a word for word retelling of the original books with just a few mentions of mc thrown in every other sentence. It follows every other trope pjo fics has, murdered dead mother, op powers but not even using it. Dialogue also feels stiff and artificial at times although no grammar or spelling mistakes ive seen.
I read up to chapter 15 and I must say it had a lot of potential until he started with SID syndrome and wanted to be someone just a little above average, since he is quite op and this led to Sally's forced death, not to mention him, despite having a photographic memory, he apparently has selective memory based on the plot for anything about Percy Jackson and those who don't like the Chinese writing style, I'm sorry, but despite not being Chinese, it seems very Chinese.
Revelar SpoilerSpectacular, simply spectacular, this book, the author and writer of this book is simply spectacular, I really like this story, how it hooks you in the way in which simple chapters make you feel emotions from happiness, joy, love to sadness, anger, anxiety. It is simply spectacular, I hope you continue with this story, you have the talent to be an excellent writer.
I really like your novel, please don't drop it. You have good grammar, the chapters are long, the characters are well developed, the MC doesn't make you cringe, and a lot of other things make your novel one of the best I've read on this website.
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This story was one of the most fun i've read in a long time. I liked how he's an actual hero that's op and yet has too many fatal flaws, one being selflessness, another being love, and another his humanity. It's amazing because I was like damn, he's in pain and there was even more pain but it was all worth it. We saw him as untouchable and you broke him, as an author should. I can't wait to see his development. You ended on quite a cliffhanger. The updates are great. The world is growing. You write pretty well and you seem to know a lot about the world. It shows in your work. Please just don't make him a shirou emiya or a peter parker. I hope that when you finish this story, however long that may be, that he is happy. Though, if that isn't your intention then forget about what I just said. This is an amazing story and I can't wait for more from you. P.s. The mom shit after arty was a stroke of evil genius. You destroyed his invincibility. Can't wait to see what he'll do now and good luck.
Revelar SpoilerThe story progresses really good. Not too slow neither too fast. It's really well written except for writing how beautiful he is like every chapter😂. But anyway that's all I can think of I don't like. It's also getting uploaded very often. The plot Twist at the end of vol. 1 was also really great, although a bit sad. Please keep up the great work
An incredible experience! This story kept me hooked from beginning to end. The plot is engaging, the characters are memorable, and the writing is simply impeccable. The author managed to create a rich and detailed world, making me feel like I was experiencing every moment with the characters. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an exciting and unforgettable read. Highlights: * Plot: Original and addictive. * Characters: Complex and well-developed. * Style: Fluid and engaging. * World: Rich and well-constructed.
The author's story kept me hooked from start to finish! The way he developed the characters and the plot was simply incredible. Each page was a new surprise, making me want to know more. I recommend it with my eyes closed!
Very good, the best Percy Jackson story I've ever read! Despite having some mistakes and some problems, if you ignore them, it's a very immersive and exciting story, the author knew how to describe the characters' emotions very well. But some readers may find this a bit bad because they want something perfect in their retarded conception!
Although it has some mistakes and is a so-so translation, this story is very good! There is a feeling in the characters that makes us feel immersive. I loved it!
Revelar SpoilerApós ler a história posso concluir, essa é uma das melhores história de Percy Jackson que eu já li, o começo pode ser meio estranho para quem já leu o livro pois parece que os diálogos são todos repetidos, mais depois a história fica muito boa, principalmente com os problemas do protagonista com seus sentimentos por Ártemis, recomendo muito a ler essa história, e se Ártemis for a única protagonista feminina seria ainda melhor.
Revelar SpoilerThis is a very fun power fantasy, would recommend to anyone who is bored or who is just starting to read fanfics
Não cheguei ler ainda, então depois volto para dar uma avaliação, mais quem será o par romântico? 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
This story is pretty interesting and the main character is cool. But I just don’t like how much stronger he is than everyone else. By chapter 25 the author says that he destroy the gods with a slap of his hand. That just really gets rid of any intrigue and tension with the story as you know that the MC is just so far above it all. I just wish that the mic developed slower. A good example of power progression in the Percy Jackson universe would be the Prince of the Underworld story by shadowmonarch he also has a character stronger than the others in the story but it feels believable and his goal makes it fine.
This is like the second best Percy Jackson fanfic I ever read keep up the good work and don’t drop the story please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Very good story. I like the way the story is told and the main character is one of the few MC that doesn't act like a douchebag or an idiot. Anxious to see how the author will develop the other characters and their relationship with one another.
Very good, the best Percy Jackson story I've ever read! Despite having some mistakes and some problems, if you ignore them, it's a very immersive and exciting story, the author knew how to describe the characters' emotions very well. But some readers may find this a bit bad because they want something perfect in their retarded conception!
The story is one of the better Percy Jackson fanfics. However, I don't like how there isn't any growth with other characters. Having the mc doing all the fighting gets old real quick.
An incredible experience! This story kept me hooked from beginning to end. The plot is engaging, the characters are memorable, and the writing is simply impeccable. The author managed to create a rich and detailed world, making me feel like I was experiencing every moment with the characters. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an exciting and unforgettable read. Highlights: * Plot: Original and addictive. * Characters: Complex and well-developed. * Style: Fluid and engaging. * World: Rich and well-constructed.
The story is very good and very well written, Ikki's development is what I'm most looking forward to here.
overall great quality, love it just hope power scaling is clear in the future cuz it seems like its heading to a cultivation powers stuff so yeah
Although it has some mistakes and is a so-so translation, this story is very good! There is a feeling in the characters that makes us feel immersive. I loved it!
self-made power level concept, MC is just lucky trash who has too smooth a life, he puts limits on his own freedom by letting himself be tied to Percy. the development of your power level is not bad, but giving the concept of energy to a world that is more familiar with abilities more like muscle strength that cannot be judged except by its impact is annoying. I mean it's like you're providing standard calculations and complicated mechanisms involving concepts that aren't explained clearly in the Origins work through exploiting loopholes in the writing, it's like you're giving the concept of mana calculations in the Black Clover anime just to provide a system for the OC, very forced.