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One of the best starts of a novel in a long time I am quite impressed seeing this quality of work from an amature writer. One rarely sees this level of writing skill and attention to detail in most novels. Its very difficult to make characters believable and alive and by the end of 39 there are 3 character I felt a human connect with the mc, his sister and mother. This is quite an accomplishment as many books are not even able to create a believable mc with 50+ characters. I genuinely felt empathy for these characters. I am not trying to glaze the author but I truly respect authors who are able to do this. I really hope this continues. I also appreciate how intresting the power mc has. Its not a typical system which gives everything to the mc for free. There is actually a cost to strength. And a believable way for mc to develope a more reserved personality. Finally I believe everyone should give this book a try and support the author. We can’t allow this hidden gem to go unnoticed any longer.
I was skeptical at first but good thing i did not listen to the bad reviews, currently at chap 35 and this novel got me hooked, cant wait for more!
This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked. While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!
The story shows promise, even though it's still early. I'm enjoying it so far; the writing quality is solid, and the updates come regularly. Mc is kind of a pushover, but I think he'll get better eventually, so I need to read through it. Overall, it is enjoyable; I recommend it. (Spoiler ahead) I also hope he doesn't get close to his family just because he lost his memory. When he finally retrieves his memories, I hope he makes them pay for what they've done.
The story was even going better after he saved his mother and brothers and started to be considered a joke. Let me ask you, would you save someone who spent his whole life excluding you, pretending you didn't exist, beating you until you were almost dead and not caring when he saw your state without being able to get up or would the brothers who always beat you break your arms and fingers? Would you save them if you had the opportunity to see them suffer?
it’s just to much unnecessary suffer without any cause for it i kinda just checked out he just getting torturing for no reason it’s been happening since the novel began like the one lady slap him twice to get answers out of him it was just ridiculous
What will he do about his family when he gets stronger? Do you plan to destroy them all or will you forgive them? If you forgive me, I'll stop reading. They don't deserve any forgiveness. None of them deserve forgiveness. Father, brothers and mother. If you forgive them, they're meaningless.
Oh super good i am really loving this you have no idea i really like your masterpiece i hope you can release more chapters i can't wait to see more
Great writing but bad story first of all I don’t really like the main character hes stupid i don’t get why his intelligence are so low he questions everything he has no confidence and don’t believe in anything at all first of all he has a system that gives information about his stats but he thinks it’s useless which it is I don’t know why the system even is in this novel I guess it’s just for use to see how powerful he is that all the system is good for not only that a sword had to tell him how to use the system the mc is just a joke at this point. Another thing that makes no sense is that mc see that the blood line information on how to use it which a normal person can till that its overpower but no he thinks its useless like what.
Revelar Spoiler
A very wonderful story with a good character design and the emotions the characters emits are perfectly written
superb novel iIjust wish the author could upload more chapters can't wait
Great novel hope you don't drop this master piece of yours it has great potential Hope you don't drop it and update regularly ...................
I am writing this review now because I think the novel has great potential and the first chapters prove it, however, I will update my review depending on the development of the novel, whether in a good or bad way.
Read up to Chapter 18 and this shit has a lot of potential. I've read a fuck ton of "Extra" novels and tho this ain't the best (TNE and Reborn as an Extra exists) it is still a solid read. The updating stability is also good with at least 1 chapter per day. His "Bloodline of Sacrifice" is also interesting and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before (maybe I have but forgot, who knows?). Anyways lance don't you dare lock this shit at chapter 20 or some shit {be more like pancakes and just don't lock it :D}
One of the best starts of a novel in a long time I am quite impressed seeing this quality of work from an amature writer. One rarely sees this level of writing skill and attention to detail in most novels. Its very difficult to make characters believable and alive and by the end of 39 there are 3 character I felt a human connect with the mc, his sister and mother. This is quite an accomplishment as many books are not even able to create a believable mc with 50+ characters. I genuinely felt empathy for these characters. I am not trying to glaze the author but I truly respect authors who are able to do this. I really hope this continues. I also appreciate how intresting the power mc has. Its not a typical system which gives everything to the mc for free. There is actually a cost to strength. And a believable way for mc to develope a more reserved personality. Finally I believe everyone should give this book a try and support the author. We can’t allow this hidden gem to go unnoticed any longer.
I was skeptical at first but good thing i did not listen to the bad reviews, currently at chap 35 and this novel got me hooked, cant wait for more!
This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked. While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!
The story shows promise, even though it's still early. I'm enjoying it so far; the writing quality is solid, and the updates come regularly. Mc is kind of a pushover, but I think he'll get better eventually, so I need to read through it. Overall, it is enjoyable; I recommend it. (Spoiler ahead) I also hope he doesn't get close to his family just because he lost his memory. When he finally retrieves his memories, I hope he makes them pay for what they've done.
The story was even going better after he saved his mother and brothers and started to be considered a joke. Let me ask you, would you save someone who spent his whole life excluding you, pretending you didn't exist, beating you until you were almost dead and not caring when he saw your state without being able to get up or would the brothers who always beat you break your arms and fingers? Would you save them if you had the opportunity to see them suffer?
it’s just to much unnecessary suffer without any cause for it i kinda just checked out he just getting torturing for no reason it’s been happening since the novel began like the one lady slap him twice to get answers out of him it was just ridiculous
What will he do about his family when he gets stronger? Do you plan to destroy them all or will you forgive them? If you forgive me, I'll stop reading. They don't deserve any forgiveness. None of them deserve forgiveness. Father, brothers and mother. If you forgive them, they're meaningless.
Oh super good i am really loving this you have no idea i really like your masterpiece i hope you can release more chapters i can't wait to see more
Great writing but bad story first of all I don’t really like the main character hes stupid i don’t get why his intelligence are so low he questions everything he has no confidence and don’t believe in anything at all first of all he has a system that gives information about his stats but he thinks it’s useless which it is I don’t know why the system even is in this novel I guess it’s just for use to see how powerful he is that all the system is good for not only that a sword had to tell him how to use the system the mc is just a joke at this point. Another thing that makes no sense is that mc see that the blood line information on how to use it which a normal person can till that its overpower but no he thinks its useless like what.
Revelar Spoiler A very wonderful story with a good character design and the emotions the characters emits are perfectly written
superb novel iIjust wish the author could upload more chapters can't wait
Great novel hope you don't drop this master piece of yours it has great potential Hope you don't drop it and update regularly ...................
I am writing this review now because I think the novel has great potential and the first chapters prove it, however, I will update my review depending on the development of the novel, whether in a good or bad way.
Read up to Chapter 18 and this shit has a lot of potential. I've read a fuck ton of "Extra" novels and tho this ain't the best (TNE and Reborn as an Extra exists) it is still a solid read. The updating stability is also good with at least 1 chapter per day. His "Bloodline of Sacrifice" is also interesting and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before (maybe I have but forgot, who knows?). Anyways lance don't you dare lock this shit at chapter 20 or some shit {be more like pancakes and just don't lock it :D}