3Opiniões
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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no world background, nada character design. can't make the head or tail of the action scenes.... [img=Speechless] could have been better..... it's like 70% of the story is still inside the author's head, he's just giving us scraps like a young master syndrome
Another shameless author review, it is normal to review my own story 5 star (because it my novel so it is perfect perfect in my eyes), just take this as a Q/A section, enjoy your reading!
Mc background not explained just is there gets a class. Who is Emma? Not explained she is just there the mc knows her but who is she sister,friend, lover, mother who knows. Infinite mana but puts points into strength instead of magic power. Steals valuable loot from party upset when attacked for using the powerful loot. This story is clearly made by a new writer who needs a ton of work.
no world background, nada character design. can't make the head or tail of the action scenes.... [img=Speechless] could have been better..... it's like 70% of the story is still inside the author's head, he's just giving us scraps like a young master syndrome
Another shameless author review, it is normal to review my own story 5 star (because it my novel so it is perfect perfect in my eyes), just take this as a Q/A section, enjoy your reading!
Mc background not explained just is there gets a class. Who is Emma? Not explained she is just there the mc knows her but who is she sister,friend, lover, mother who knows. Infinite mana but puts points into strength instead of magic power. Steals valuable loot from party upset when attacked for using the powerful loot. This story is clearly made by a new writer who needs a ton of work.