4Opiniões
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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As of chapter 7, the story felt abit rushed but it is understandable since the author is setting up the background for the mc. Looking foward for new chapters.
Many plot holes most of the time u forget his suit has a HELMET ur choice and i get the practical purpose but if u chose that u have to remember that it blocks the use of breath powers. then u say he has a visor, so no heat vison. thier are more examples but u get it. While i dont mind that it a fast paced story i feel some of the relationships are developing faster then normal and thats never good. u need more nuisance in the conversation not a sledgehammer.
Great so far. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
As of chapter 7, the story felt abit rushed but it is understandable since the author is setting up the background for the mc. Looking foward for new chapters.
Many plot holes most of the time u forget his suit has a HELMET ur choice and i get the practical purpose but if u chose that u have to remember that it blocks the use of breath powers. then u say he has a visor, so no heat vison. thier are more examples but u get it. While i dont mind that it a fast paced story i feel some of the relationships are developing faster then normal and thats never good. u need more nuisance in the conversation not a sledgehammer.