Reborn as Naruto's older brother

LV 3

SpaceMate

10 reviews = bonus chapter 50 comments = bonus chapter 200 gems = bonus chapter

LV 15

Gawd

OK, so here is my take on the story. the MC has a super system that will let him basically become a god. but he is so wrapped up in making sure cannon happens as it should because naruto is needed to Beat kaguya and the otutsuki despite himself being able to become God level. the MC is also a complete defeatist. in short while the storyidea and system are intriguing the MC and his personality ruin it for me.

LV 5

Orthanos

This story is all over the place. Really. MC self detonates constantly, forgets his own schemes. Words either mistranslated or put out of place constantly. A crap load of Very long paragraphs. The Direction of the story is all over the place too There is hope for the story but its a long shot. Needs editing badly and grammar checked. Words like Yaki? Hollow? Pump? and a crapload of other words either mistranslated or Ai into it. Something is here... But requires a forgiving soul to screen through the mess.

LV 4

Tauan_Ferraz

muito bom, uma história realmente boa. estarei acompanhando

LV 13

earth_19998

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