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Great ff. It's a smooth reading, plot is slow paced and well written. I can't wait for more chapters
ok, this is not a smut. It's a Harry Potter twin little brother. Tge story has a wonderful plot that stays close to cannon but with the writer's on quorks. His system as the Mc says himself " has to check on it to make sure it's not dead". For the most part up the broom class it's been mc x Hermione.
out of curiosity did you steal this from another author or did you simply take parts from another fic and not give credit?
When I first approached this story, I did so with no expectations whatsoever. I thought it would be just another passing hp fic, something to occupy my time. However, I quickly found myself completely captivated. This is one of those rare stories that really draws you in and holds your attention. Please upload more!!
I fking like this MC[img=recommend]...........................................................................................................................
Good translation, good dialogues, good humor, has Cassandra Vole as a love interest. Nice book overall[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
No slapping, arrogance, humiliation or bias of the author I don't know if the MC is an antihero or a villain but his acting skills are top notch lol
Good enough. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
I was here to criticize it for $@xulizing but I really like the story and it's cute and not pe*vert@d😍😍😍[img=update].................................
Great ff. It's a smooth reading, plot is slow paced and well written. I can't wait for more chapters
ok, this is not a smut. It's a Harry Potter twin little brother. Tge story has a wonderful plot that stays close to cannon but with the writer's on quorks. His system as the Mc says himself " has to check on it to make sure it's not dead". For the most part up the broom class it's been mc x Hermione.
out of curiosity did you steal this from another author or did you simply take parts from another fic and not give credit?
When I first approached this story, I did so with no expectations whatsoever. I thought it would be just another passing hp fic, something to occupy my time. However, I quickly found myself completely captivated. This is one of those rare stories that really draws you in and holds your attention. Please upload more!!
I fking like this MC[img=recommend]...........................................................................................................................
Good translation, good dialogues, good humor, has Cassandra Vole as a love interest. Nice book overall[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
No slapping, arrogance, humiliation or bias of the author I don't know if the MC is an antihero or a villain but his acting skills are top notch lol
Good enough. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
I was here to criticize it for $@xulizing but I really like the story and it's cute and not pe*vert@d😍😍😍[img=update].................................