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Buena base, mal desarrollo. El hecho de que el protagonista comparta su habilidad con los demás le quita todo lo que tiene de especial como personaje, preferiría que sea egoísta y no comparta su habilidad. Si esto se mejora de alguna manera a posteriori por favor que alguien me lo diga y le daré otra oportunidad, hasta entonces me parece la calificación más adecuada
I love most of your books... so let's write the series to 100 episodes as soon as possible author-san. (Threat)
The writing quality has some grammatical error other than that its a good read but don't judge like how I did at the very first chapters. The bad thing however is important details are spoiled at first. It doesn't have new plot till chap 23 same canon plot. not sure about future. Honestly I don't like idea about having 6 clover, a unique idea nonetheless
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My review is simple. The story is amazing, like all the other ones. So I'm happy
finally, a Dr strange powers fic, oh I've been waiting for this, hope it's worth that it makes a name for itself here
A nice black clover fic... strange is one of Marvel's strongest characters and to put all his powers in a 15year old without making the character too op but also strong enough is cool.... Also black clover deserves good fics and this one has the potential to be
the mc is strong but not overpowered that can have the strength to beat the wizard king in 5 chapter. The mc is also need to work hard to master the magic he got unlike other ff mc where the they master the ability without doing anything.... TRY IT....
It's really good. You know, somehow I want cry of happiness. I was here when the author first start writing fanfic. It's was not good but I was potential in him. Although I was disappointed because of not seeing much improvement but this makes all that better. I can continue to read you work again author. I am sorry for words in past. Hope you forgive me. But this one is really good! I will be eagerly waiting for every update!
Autor tem como fazer uma história de dualu dalu 2 com protagonista com Golden Dragon King Spirit 😶😶with a summon-less system .,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,.,m.,
there's not many Black clover ff now days. ill just waiting for more chapter knowing the author only writing peak novel. more more more more more chapter please
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Здравствуйте! Кто любит клише добро пожаловать! Очередной фанфик про гарем, где главный герой крадёт всё у основных персонажей и возвышаются, а остальные кушают то что поедет с его стола, то есть объедки
IT'S SHADOW MF!!! [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Ayo, didn't think I'd catch the drop within the first hour. Been reading this on Patreon the past couple months and this has been great so far. Dont know much about Black Clover, read it a bit when it was first coming out but stopped at some point in the early arcs so this is somewhat of a new story to me. I'm always on the lookout for fics where the MC has the Dr. Strange power system(though I've mainly just looked at HP crossover fics). Plus, Shadow has probably been one of my favorite authors the past couple months since most of their fics have been right up my alley. Keep up the good work my guy!
Keep it up the novel is great 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
Revelar Spoiler Buena base, mal desarrollo. El hecho de que el protagonista comparta su habilidad con los demás le quita todo lo que tiene de especial como personaje, preferiría que sea egoísta y no comparta su habilidad. Si esto se mejora de alguna manera a posteriori por favor que alguien me lo diga y le daré otra oportunidad, hasta entonces me parece la calificación más adecuada
I love most of your books... so let's write the series to 100 episodes as soon as possible author-san. (Threat)
The writing quality has some grammatical error other than that its a good read but don't judge like how I did at the very first chapters. The bad thing however is important details are spoiled at first. It doesn't have new plot till chap 23 same canon plot. not sure about future. Honestly I don't like idea about having 6 clover, a unique idea nonetheless
Revelar Spoiler My review is simple. The story is amazing, like all the other ones. So I'm happy
finally, a Dr strange powers fic, oh I've been waiting for this, hope it's worth that it makes a name for itself here
A nice black clover fic... strange is one of Marvel's strongest characters and to put all his powers in a 15year old without making the character too op but also strong enough is cool.... Also black clover deserves good fics and this one has the potential to be
the mc is strong but not overpowered that can have the strength to beat the wizard king in 5 chapter. The mc is also need to work hard to master the magic he got unlike other ff mc where the they master the ability without doing anything.... TRY IT....
It's really good. You know, somehow I want cry of happiness. I was here when the author first start writing fanfic. It's was not good but I was potential in him. Although I was disappointed because of not seeing much improvement but this makes all that better. I can continue to read you work again author. I am sorry for words in past. Hope you forgive me. But this one is really good! I will be eagerly waiting for every update!
Autor tem como fazer uma história de dualu dalu 2 com protagonista com Golden Dragon King Spirit 😶😶with a summon-less system .,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,.,m.,
there's not many Black clover ff now days. ill just waiting for more chapter knowing the author only writing peak novel. more more more more more chapter please
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Здравствуйте! Кто любит клише добро пожаловать! Очередной фанфик про гарем, где главный герой крадёт всё у основных персонажей и возвышаются, а остальные кушают то что поедет с его стола, то есть объедки
IT'S SHADOW MF!!! [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Ayo, didn't think I'd catch the drop within the first hour. Been reading this on Patreon the past couple months and this has been great so far. Dont know much about Black Clover, read it a bit when it was first coming out but stopped at some point in the early arcs so this is somewhat of a new story to me. I'm always on the lookout for fics where the MC has the Dr. Strange power system(though I've mainly just looked at HP crossover fics). Plus, Shadow has probably been one of my favorite authors the past couple months since most of their fics have been right up my alley. Keep up the good work my guy!
Keep it up the novel is great 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
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