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This is a good fanfiction right here. It’s an interesting concept done very well. The first 15 or so chapters are pretty much unchanged from cannon, which in most cases would be the chapters you want to skip, but in this case it’s actually well done. The characterization in these chapters is great. It’s the perfect progression to where I think his character is going (there isn’t that many chapters yet) and act creatively bends the cannon actions to change your perspective on the MC, which i think is clever. My biggest criticism is the extreme repetition in the writing. It’s great to see a WebNovel mc who isn’t completely unfeeling and coldly logical, but it sometimes feels like hes a broken record going on and on about the same self doubts. Maybe you could use the other characters perspetives more often to break up his walls of text, but idk im not a good writer. Please keep writing this, its an entertaining story that looks like its gonna get pretty spicy soon.
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okay, the story and the Denki POV is quite good. Now... just asiking is it harem...
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So far a bit boring since nothing really interesting is happening yet, but it's well written and seems to have potential. Although you gotta like the main character who is Kaminari and his rather unique personality. I'd tell you not to read this if you don't like a MC with somewhat perverted personalitie and well... everything that identifies Kaminari's character.
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Well, It's rare to see an MHA fic with a POV from Denki Kaminari's perspective. For now 5 stars, I hope it stays that way and you don't lower the quality of the writing.
🤔🤔Interesting. I like the idea and I'm looking forward to the next chapters, so far I like the beginning of the fic but I need more chapters to be able to decide if this is really worth it or not
Hi! Then, this story is a real banger! Literally pure perfection... or well, at least I try to be! Haha, just kidding. The truth is, there's probably a lot of mistakes out there... But hey, they always say you learn fast when you're wrong, right? So... I guess I'll get better little by little! I hope you'll give it a chance, I promise it won't be a total disaster... or so I hope, at least. Denki Kaminari, our prota, is a cheerful, joking and somewhat carefree character(oh and quite perv heh) but at the same time aware of his faults. I wanted to reflect that optimistic and a bit insecure tone that characterizes him. I'm open to any cosntructive criticism you might have for me.
This is a good fanfiction right here. It’s an interesting concept done very well. The first 15 or so chapters are pretty much unchanged from cannon, which in most cases would be the chapters you want to skip, but in this case it’s actually well done. The characterization in these chapters is great. It’s the perfect progression to where I think his character is going (there isn’t that many chapters yet) and act creatively bends the cannon actions to change your perspective on the MC, which i think is clever. My biggest criticism is the extreme repetition in the writing. It’s great to see a WebNovel mc who isn’t completely unfeeling and coldly logical, but it sometimes feels like hes a broken record going on and on about the same self doubts. Maybe you could use the other characters perspetives more often to break up his walls of text, but idk im not a good writer. Please keep writing this, its an entertaining story that looks like its gonna get pretty spicy soon.
Revelar Spoiler okay, the story and the Denki POV is quite good. Now... just asiking is it harem...
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Revelar Spoiler So far a bit boring since nothing really interesting is happening yet, but it's well written and seems to have potential. Although you gotta like the main character who is Kaminari and his rather unique personality. I'd tell you not to read this if you don't like a MC with somewhat perverted personalitie and well... everything that identifies Kaminari's character.
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Well, It's rare to see an MHA fic with a POV from Denki Kaminari's perspective. For now 5 stars, I hope it stays that way and you don't lower the quality of the writing.
🤔🤔Interesting. I like the idea and I'm looking forward to the next chapters, so far I like the beginning of the fic but I need more chapters to be able to decide if this is really worth it or not
Hi! Then, this story is a real banger! Literally pure perfection... or well, at least I try to be! Haha, just kidding. The truth is, there's probably a lot of mistakes out there... But hey, they always say you learn fast when you're wrong, right? So... I guess I'll get better little by little! I hope you'll give it a chance, I promise it won't be a total disaster... or so I hope, at least. Denki Kaminari, our prota, is a cheerful, joking and somewhat carefree character(oh and quite perv heh) but at the same time aware of his faults. I wanted to reflect that optimistic and a bit insecure tone that characterizes him. I'm open to any cosntructive criticism you might have for me.