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Lovely story so far. I hope you don't create too many love interests, but instead develop the character(s) to a large extent.
Good start. hope u don't go the Pokemon line down. i don't get the puppets... totally useless! puppets who look like Ino and Tenten, MHH! update following
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Okay. I'm invested. I'm locked in for the long run and eagerly awaiting the next update. I just hope you don't make me wait to long. I'm not very patient.
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Great start author please continue this book, Aramaki fruit is really OP hope mc uses it well.
Amazing story so far💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
Lovely story so far. I hope you don't create too many love interests, but instead develop the character(s) to a large extent.
Good start. hope u don't go the Pokemon line down. i don't get the puppets... totally useless! puppets who look like Ino and Tenten, MHH! update following
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Okay. I'm invested. I'm locked in for the long run and eagerly awaiting the next update. I just hope you don't make me wait to long. I'm not very patient.
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Great start author please continue this book, Aramaki fruit is really OP hope mc uses it well.
Amazing story so far💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚