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I love this story, the way MC develops his powers is very entertaining, look, I don't really like the harem but in this story I loved the way he interacts with the girls and doesn't leave them aside, he helps them become stronger, not like in other stories that treat the girls in the harem like girls for sex and that's it and they don't interact with each other (I don't know if I make myself clear?) The story is a 10/10.
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it's a nice story, i just want him to develop more on the puppet and poison to have a unique new flavor.
Is this a Harem? I hope it is, I don't want to waste my time if it isn't. ...................................................................................................................................
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The story is very entertaining, if I had to criticize something it would be that the protagonist is a little naive and very trusting with the information, but those small details do not ruin the reading, in my opinion.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline]
all right, I'm on chapter 45. Mc is still 8 y/o. This is a good slow burn, with a strong foundation. Idk if the writer is planning a time skip. Mc plains of becoming the harem king, but so far, there are only three maybes and one loveable psycho snake-lady. BTW, idk Moagi had wood release, so thanks writer-san for the info.
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I like this mc but he just look like he doesnt want to effect the story . but story are to my liking
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This story is bloody brilliant! The grammar is good and the pacing of the story is nicely done. If you can make an auxiliary chapter explaining his powers that would be helpful. Is it his golden finger that allows him to retain bloodline powers? Not only sharingan but other kekkai genkai could be retained by absorbing bodies? Looking forward to reading more.
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Is it a harem? I'm really enjoying the story so far, but I honestly hate harems, so if so, please tell me not to get my hopes up. ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
The story is good, the author has a lot of knowledge about the world of Naruto and respects its rules and standards, many Naruto fanfic authors don't know anything about the functions of chakra, my only criticism is that the dialogues could be better worked and detailed, as well as the space where the MC is located could also be more detailed because this enriches the story.
Amazing story so far💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
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I love this story, the way MC develops his powers is very entertaining, look, I don't really like the harem but in this story I loved the way he interacts with the girls and doesn't leave them aside, he helps them become stronger, not like in other stories that treat the girls in the harem like girls for sex and that's it and they don't interact with each other (I don't know if I make myself clear?) The story is a 10/10.
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it's a nice story, i just want him to develop more on the puppet and poison to have a unique new flavor.
Is this a Harem? I hope it is, I don't want to waste my time if it isn't. ...................................................................................................................................
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The story is very entertaining, if I had to criticize something it would be that the protagonist is a little naive and very trusting with the information, but those small details do not ruin the reading, in my opinion.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline]
all right, I'm on chapter 45. Mc is still 8 y/o. This is a good slow burn, with a strong foundation. Idk if the writer is planning a time skip. Mc plains of becoming the harem king, but so far, there are only three maybes and one loveable psycho snake-lady. BTW, idk Moagi had wood release, so thanks writer-san for the info.
ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga ooga booga
I like this mc but he just look like he doesnt want to effect the story . but story are to my liking
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This story is bloody brilliant! The grammar is good and the pacing of the story is nicely done. If you can make an auxiliary chapter explaining his powers that would be helpful. Is it his golden finger that allows him to retain bloodline powers? Not only sharingan but other kekkai genkai could be retained by absorbing bodies? Looking forward to reading more.
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Is it a harem? I'm really enjoying the story so far, but I honestly hate harems, so if so, please tell me not to get my hopes up. ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
The story is good, the author has a lot of knowledge about the world of Naruto and respects its rules and standards, many Naruto fanfic authors don't know anything about the functions of chakra, my only criticism is that the dialogues could be better worked and detailed, as well as the space where the MC is located could also be more detailed because this enriches the story.
Amazing story so far💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
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